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plutomoon2 2008-08-31 . chapter 2
please get some more chapters it is geting good
Lex 2008-04-30 . chapter 2
I just found your story quite recently and I'm impressed.

Sailor Moon/Rayearth crossover are almost nonexistent and most of the ones I've read haven't been written well. (and Usagi x Zagato, even though a nonexistent pairing, is just too awesome for words)

I have only one question, is there a chance you might come back to this story? You've certainly left your readers hanging with the flashfroward in the prologue.

~Lex
Zorah-Fire 2005-06-27 . chapter 2
like it...
SurfAngel 2003-11-02 . chapter 2
How does Serena know Zagato?
Fallen Angel 2003-06-04 . chapter 2
Hey Tenshi... I said I would reveiw when I got the chance... I really like the premise for this story, and we can never have enough MKR and SM cross overs ^_^.. I really like it so far. I am thinking of wiping my stories clean and starting over... with a cyberpunk SM crossover with GW maybe or another computer related anime. Email me and tell me what you think. oh and I don't know if I will get to read the other chapters to this any time soon, so...uh... let me know about them.. :)
Squirrel 2003-04-28 . chapter 2
I finally read the Manga (up to #5) but I really like where you are going with it. I am kinda between indifferent and total dislike of Emeraude Because she made the magic knights kill her and go through all that suffering just because she couldn't do it herself.
liltle 2003-04-24 . chapter 2
Hai, I've just read your story and I can't believe for there is finally a MKR cross. I've never seen or saw the story demo I've seen the bishiee, cool and bihiee guys. I just adore Eagle so much and was wondering if you would like to make this an Eagle/Usagi fic demo since you said it's going to be a Zagato/Usa fic, it's okay. I still love Zagato and I'll still read your story. So plez update sooner. Byee...
akahime-chan 2003-01-26 . chapter 2
I love your story already... it's really sad for Ami-chan right now, but it's going to be even sadder for Usagi-chan ::Crying half to death.:: Please write more!
Sailor_Tsunami 2003-01-24 . chapter 2
OMG! You had to stop huh! Write more!
Aori 2003-01-20 . chapter 2
Saa....so you're finally back???? WAI!!! ^^ Hmm...so Zagato is technically the Lord of the UnderWorld. -.-;;; Eh heh...I pity him...^^; Mou...I have patience. ^^ I got new manga, so ic ould wait...for sometime. *sweatdrop* Erk...see you sometime,ne? Well, ja ne!
Celestial DreamBlaze 2003-01-20 . chapter 2
*hugglez back* hehe.. you shouldn't be flattered.. you do write good stuff.. but anyway.. was i the person you were talking about?? if you sent me the site then maybe i can give it back to you.. ^.~ returning the favor so to speak..

Poor Usa.. how could the ginzuishou say that?! Ami-chan isn't needed? that's so sad.. it must of infuriated Usagi to think that, it was Ami who helped her the most. i was surprised when you put god into the fore.. God isn't 'magic' and has nothing to do with SM.. usually people put into Selene, Chronus, and they mythology gods.. stupid Ginzuishou.. i have to wonder what the Ginzuishou meant also...

*muses* i had wondered how you would introduce the two animes together and it seems i got my answer.. our sweet innocent Usa-chan is gonna sell her soul and become one of the dark ones.. scary.. i like how Zagato has a conscience and a person from the underworld isn't literally evil.. one question.. Will Ami-chan kno of Usa's sacrifice?

Great as always
Post more soon
Much mahal and mahalos
~Cbee-chan
labellily 2003-01-20 . chapter 2
*crawls after disappearing chapter* No..... come back! I just want to read it one more time.....
*FanFiction.net police appear with VERY BIG GUNS*
squad: Crazygurl70, step away from the chapter!
Crazy: But--
squad: FIRE!
onlooker: wow. I didn't think the police were allowed to do that.
random person: \/\/04|-|, d00d! 7|-|47'5 /\/\4d |!!!
Momoko 2002-12-06 . chapter 1
Naaaaaaaaaaaah, just give the plot bunnies lots and lots of digital carrots ^_^
You ought to continue! I think it's pretty interesting that she's selling her freaking SOUL! O_O That's just the typre of person she is, I guess...
lady love 2002-12-01 . chapter 1
this is a great idea and I hope you will continue!! Great chapter!!!
Yuki Kamitoki 2002-12-01 . chapter 1
I got to comment on the plot bunnies. They are weird, but produce interesting scenarios.

You should continue this fic as well. It would help me understand more about MKR and I get to read more of your works! ^__^

And you did a superb job on the style of 'introducing the near-end part first and then flashing back' technique. It blended in quite nicely.

Anyhow, I'll be expecting you to update this fic soon! Bai bai!! ^__^

Yuki Kamitoki
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