This was an amazing story! Good to find some good action stories out there and this is definitely one of them!;) Characterization was spot on...but if you ever want a beta, just to check things over, let me know either in an email or review, 'k? Write on!

*GASP*
The story is really terrific. And the way you can actually weave everyone's ('pecially Sanzo's) emotions into the action is superb.
And that ink water brush analogy... @_@...

But I think you should slow it with the chapters next time (1 at a time please!) ;) ...(plus i think it's depriving you of reviews you deserve coz u're scaring pple away...hahaha)

Cool Story!

Weeh that thing about the ink, the water and the brush is simply great! I like at the beginning when Goku wants to eat the weeds around** Well I read all the story in an afternoon, instead of studying, because I couldn't stop! Go on writing! Thanks for this great Sanzo story...

I believe I haven't review the story yet, because of my spoilt computer....to tell you the truth...I really like it. I like the ending, the middle...I like the part they (Kougaiji-taichi and Sanzo-ikkou) worked together to solve the problem, and the storyline is great.

Please write some more....for meee to review more...

Thank you Caer, Rook, kolpol940 for ya reviews!!! Honoto ni arigatou gozaimasu!!!

This is sooo good it should be animated!I look forward to reading your fanfics.Thought I'd let you know:)

Good gracious, write much? It was an unexpected pleasure to get hit by three chapters at once. Wonderfully written. I like your characters and I think you did a great job with working out the story and magic of the Sutra. The whole paper ink brush thing was just fantastic. I hope to see more writing from you in the future. Thanks!

Ooh! This one is very good! Good good job! Please continue. I like the suspense and the story flows nicely. Great characterization too! More more!

Oooh, VERY GOOOOOD

Wonderfully made. Go on write forward!!

There's something fishy abt dez sutras. Too easy for Sanzo. Hurry up the next chapter!!!!

Wow! That ws so suspenseful... i wonder if the sutra is a fake one cuz the hissing is so suspicious...hmm
pls update!

VERY GOOD!!! The mystery, the storyline...continue on