 Hikari Elfie 2005-09-09 . chapter 3YAY, CHIBI'S * dances until falls down* YAY- breath- good- breath- story *collapses |
 crowkeeper990 2004-09-03 . chapter 3 0oU ...i feel really bad for your yami having to put up with your insanity... this story made me feel like i was about to burst a lung, i was laughing that hard... i didn't stop until about an hour ago. that's because i really needed to catch my breath and take some asprine *massages throat* ow... i feel like i broke a few vocal cords...according to my mother, i was laughing at the ridiculousness of this story for roughly 3 hours straight. please do me a favor and cont this, even though it's over a year old at least... thanx, but if you don't you will need to face the wraith of my army of crows. hence my pen-name, ne?*cawing of millions of crows heard from background* *smiles with talons bared and fangs gleaming* update please! |
 POPCORN 2004-07-05 . chapter 3 haha.id hate to be in yami chibi mysteries place.i wouldnt mind being in marks place though...lol. |
 Red Dragon of Egypt 2004-06-11 . chapter 2 RD:;; uh do u know how wrong u made this pretend game sound hoy anyways now were was...*is stopped by a sudden zap of lightening light fades and she is now a a young wyerling*young dragon* WTF WHO THE #*# HELL DID THIS *turns at the culprit Marik*
Marik:*looks totally insane*AAHHAHAHAHA now *points the Mellenium Rod at her*its payback for all us innocent villains u hurt cuz we hurt yugi and yami
RD:*starts crying*sniff YAMI HELP
BRD:*appears in a puff of obisdian smoke*WHAT THE HELL ARE U DOING TO MY HIKARI MARIK
M:taking out Red Dragon of Egypt for hurting us vilains since she is helpless as a young weak dragon
BRD:*looks at her Hikari*O_O;NO WHAT HAVE U DONE
M:what
BRD:UMORON SHE WILL KILL U IF U THREATEN HER AS A WYERLING I KNOW well CYA MARIK IM OUTA HERE*takes off for anther planet away from earth
M:how dangerous can u be*looks at anow glowing RD*oh
RD:NOW U WILL PAY FOR THREATENING ME U BASTARD*grabs a jr version of her Wurmslayer and a Centi Long sword and in an impressive show of skill slices Marik into a dozen pieces and then eats him* >>Burp |
 Red Dragon of Egypt 2004-06-11 . chapter 3 RD:*singing Unbreak my heart*Unbreak my heart say u love me again undo this hurt u caused when u walk out the door
Black Red Dragon:uh RD *points to the Mystery*
RD:uh*looks*oh oops ^_^;; sry didnt mean to keep u waitin i just love this aong great story mystery hehe yur as funny as Klonoa even my yami had to agree
BRD: heh ya shes right yur evilness almost matches mine keep it up young one u may earn the right to join my club soon now what tomrents can i teach u any ideas hikari
RD:hm lets see well if anzu wakes up again we can play feed the snake i think Bassy is getting hungry again
BRD:*looks over at the cave holding bassy* ur right she is hungry what do u think mystery its yur call but if u want u can borrow our pet her name is bassy cuz she is an anzu killing baslisk dont worry we trained not to attack anyone we like wich is u ur yami yugi and his yami um
RD:joey and ryou and maybe malik but thats its really so its up to u well gtg now mystery UPDATE PLS TTFN TATA FOR NOW BRD:*sighs*ya bye*glares at her hikari*i wish u wouldnt say that well cya myst |
 Red Dragon of Egypt 2004-06-09 . chapter 3 RD:BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! ooh that was a good one yami ill have to rememer that one hmm now lets see here ooh i know i know turn all the hikaris into chibis and eat all the sugar yur tummies can handle and then watch the fun role hehe OH the yamis will need and industrial sized bottles asprins hehe*listening to the Tenshi Muyo CD Song:washu's Lulaby*oh hey Mystery question do u mind yu and the other hikaris singing a anime theme song of their choice or even just song they like from an anime even YGO hehe i just want to hear yugi sing Its Your Move I LOVE THAT SONG YUGIOH HE"S THE KING OF GAMES OH YEAH BAYBA woot well lets see here um *digs into her gift cavrern*oh here mystery your very own white eyes black dragon (looks like the red eyes except has white eyes instead of red)Y.Mystery u get black eyes Red dragon(basically the colors are reversed for the red eyes)yugi u get a gold eyes white dragon and yami u get a Blood eyes red Dragon with black tiped snout and horns with black slit cat like eyes hehe oh and best of all THEY ALL HATE ANZU WITH THE BIGGEST OF PASSIONS put just one in front of anzu and they will do whatever u wish for them to do to her even turn her into a chew toy for them though they might get sick if they eat her skin so here*anti-poison drops*just give them this that way they wont get sick so have mystery YUR THE BEST ahahahah and u CRACK ME UP yur just as funny as the revered Klonoa *crouches down and bows her head* I AM NOT WORTHY OH MIGHTY MASTERS OF YGO FICS hehe well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW oh um yugi and yami pls tell me if u dont like my way of saying goodbye if u think its stupid ill stop but i want to know from u two so if u can tell me pls do bye-^_^- |
 Ril 2004-04-10 . chapter 3XD Chibiness is fun!! |
 Destiny 2003-04-14 . chapter 3 Kawaii desu ne! Keep it up...um...Chibi Mystery! And I want to know what happens to let's see the... *suddenly someone sprayed her with a chibisizer*
Chibi Destiny- Wat the $^#@$*#@&*()%#@#%^*!
*sees a giant Bakura smirking evilly*
Bakura- Now, I can still her Millenum Stone! *was about to grab a golden stone with Egyptian writings and the Eye of Ra in it*
Chibi Destiny- Don't touch ma miwwenium stone! *bites Bakura's hands*
Bakura- Ah! *was screaming his head off while nursing it*
Ryou- *sweatdrops*
Chibi Destiny- *was now in a army costume* Now here this sowdier! Give me 3,420,0,0,001 push-ups right now or ewse! *has a giant cannon beside her*
Bakura- *sweatdrops and starts to do it*
Ryou- *grabs a camera* Thanks Destiny! Mwahahahahahaha! Now I can blackmail him!
Chibi Destiny- Oh well, bye, bye Chibi Mystery, keep it up! Oh yeah, hewe! *some blackmail stuffs and a giant cartoony machine gun* Now goodluck! See ya soon! |
 Evergladelord 2003-04-04 . chapter 3Kanyu Dragonlord:*blinks as he watches Rykio,his massive black dragon,try to get past Evergladelord to eat Chibi Mystery*"NO!BAD DRAGON!YOU DO NOT EAT THE CHIBI AUTHORESS!I DON'T CARE IF YOU CONSIDER CHIBIS BITE SIZED SNACKS,YOU DON'T EAT THEM!"
Rykio:*Eats Evergladelord*
Kanyu:*Whaps Rykio,who spits out Evergladelord*
Evergladelord:UPDATE SOON! |
 Umeko the God 2003-03-27 . chapter 3Whee!! Cute fic!! ^^ I don't particularly like the hikari/yami pairings... but I seem to be able to tolerate any sort of Yu-Gi-Oh fic, no matter the subject (as long as there aren't long, incoherent run-on sentences or a really really really stupid plot...). Meh.
I give you LOTS of chocolate and candy! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *throws it all over the place*
And lastly... MY BLUE EYES ULTIMATE DRAGON ROARS AT YOU! *presses the button on his back*
BEUD: *like a truck* ROAR!
Okay, keep going! Really cute! ^^ *waves* |
 Avezinzi 2003-01-31 . chapter 3Ave:: 0.o
Malik:: 0.o
Ave:: Wow your chibi sure likes to cause trouble...
Chibi Ave:: (grins) Come hang out with me sometime! And bring your Yami...
Ave:: (sweatdrops)
Malik:: (grins evilly) I HATE Tea/Anzu, that selfish sneaky **...she is the cause of half my problems...would people get mad if I killed her-?
Ave:: (MAJOR sweatdrop) Yes they would, dear. Oh, as an idea for the mischevous chibi...maybe she would like to turn them all into diffrent cute fuzzy animals...
Malik:: 0.o
Ave:: Or theres always the possibility of making them all turn into chibi's and giving them marshmallow fluff to play with... Just a few ideas. Oh, and your Yami wanted this-? (chucks him a God Card) And heres a potion that will make any character turn into a balloon (USE IT ON PEGGY/PEGASUS!)
Malik:: ...
Ave:: please write more soon! |
 Vera-chan 2003-01-25 . chapter 3Vera: MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! *holds up hands and lightning crashes in background*
Yami Vera: --D Oh dear Ra......
Vera: *huggles plushies* ARIGATO! Luvies ur story!!! MUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAH- *gets struck by lightning* Itai.....
Yami Vera: I told you not to play with the special effects aibou.
Vera: I get it now..... *rubs head* Anywhoos, you doing a good job on dis un! I LUV THE QUOTES!! One of my favorite quotes of all time is: I dropped a tear in the ocean, the day I find it is the day I stop loving you. Of course you'd probably remember that.
Kaji insert note: ^^D You're hopless Vera-chan.
Vera: HAI! .....wait......
Yami Vera: Alright then. We'll leave you lot be and hope for a new chapter soon. Ja ne!
Vera: JA NE!! *waves maniacally*
Yami Vera: --D |
 Hime no Ichigo 2003-01-24 . chapter 3Me: AAAWWWWW!!!!! Thanks for the plushies, they are absolutely adorable! *huggles them*
Yami Strawberry: -.-;; She went skiing today, and she's gone sugar-high! I swear, she was laughing so much her friends looked at her like she had grown three heads or something!
Me: *pouts* You so mean. |
 chibi gohan fan 2003-01-24 . chapter 3 YEAH YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!! ME SO HAPPY!!!!!!! OH AND HERE ARE SOME GIFTS FOR YOU!!!!!!!! CANDY CANDY WEAPONS ICE CREAM AND A PLUSHIE THAT TURNS TO ANYTHING, THAT`S YOUR GIFTS!!!! AND PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
 gabby 2003-01-23 . chapter 3 that was funny as usual |