Great job! I love the "don't screw with Catherine" thought. lol!! You're hilarious!

hey syl
you have one good writers mind. You know i don't really read N/S that much but this is one hell of a good story!

You really like writing long stories dont you?

nice work!

Good, well if Sara gets pregnant then they could tell them that Nicks the father and that they are going out

I don't think they'll have to tell Catherine! She'll probably figure it out on her own. Spreading the Greggo love!

How could anyone possibly give a flame?! This chapter had N/S and Greggo praise! I'm in HEAVEN! Keep up the FANTABULOUS work and post SOON!

Great story! I like the plots, but your Grissom is way out of character. He would NEVER use cuss words or references to pop culture (see Matt Damon and Ben Affleck friendship reference). He is also more paternal and aloof than pictured in the story. Criticism aside, this is a great story. Keep it up!

HELLO!,

Dude wotz up? hey? why arn't u answering me, hey now arn't u even ganna talk to me, hey wait up, now i remember, im not on the phone to my 'BOYFRIEND' so i have to wait a whole heap of time for u to reply. i mean that was what that last chapter was rite? i mean the amount of time u actually bothered to talk to me was lyk way longer than u bothered on the god-damned story! i mena its not lyk i log on so as i can read what u have to say to me, NO, i log on so as i can read the 'inteligent, articulate, really quite smart, story' and yes i did actully mena everything i jus wrote, but lyk i was thinkin about it before and personally i dont think that you have the brains to write such a magnificent piece. so i guess the acts up, i no longer want to talk to you, i wan tot talk to the real author. by the way i think that it is aboout time that i told you, im a ALIEN! thats rite, yes, yes, yes i mean do i really look like the type of person that would lie to you? imean i knoe that you can't actually see me but i can see you as you read it and i knoe that you are shakin your head in disbelife, and you knoe how? coz i can see you, yes thats rite i escaped the phych ward and came to meet you, but now dat i knoe that truth i dont htink i can trust you, you knoe i dont think that i like you any more and you knoe wot, i think that maybe jus maybe i might dispose of you in an hygeneic manner, hey did i ever tell you why i was placed in the phych ward? yeah well i was sorta encouraged not to reveal that sorta info to people i dont knoe. especially some one that lies to me!but i will give u a clue i had a bit of a run in with the police

anywayz i think that waybe i should Review ya story or so u claim but yeah i guess i should review it lyk the name suggested. well i guess that i lyked it, yeah i did, i lyked it alot, but hey could you amke the spaces between chaptwes any longer? hey lyk i mean come on i coul dhave been an olde lady by now. don't you have any respect? u knoe i dont think that im all that great at writing reviews i seem to get distracted very easily.

yeah well isorta have to go, u knoe wot happens when you publish another chap, i will speak to u more. sor hurry it up.

Ta...ta...ta...ta...today junior

Abbz. what country are you from? and lyk how old and all dat? oh and by the way if this is all in ya profile well dont expect me to go and look cause im not that god-damned smart. well actually i am rather smart. but hey not in that sence.

That was good. I never thought anyone could be that deranged (sp?). I can't wait for the next chapter, and don't worry about the length, the content makes up for it.

My friend (if anyone reads my stories, it's the evil FFej) imed me about your story(would you like to hear a probably condensed version of our convorsation? Of course!):
FFej:I just read a REALLY good fic
me:NAME NAME NAME
FFej:but im sure uv read it
me:i don't care tell me the name
FFej:Draugr
me:o no i haven't
FFej:ITS SO GOOD
FFej:and theres like NO romance
Ok the end, like my story? He hates romance stories, and I gotta say even though I do enjoy a good romance fic, it's still just as good without.

Wow. That's all I can say. Wow.
I LOVE this, this is, w/o a doubt, one of THE best fics I've read on this site. Im loving every chap.
I cant wait til the next one is up!

Hey readers!

I don't know why, but I can't get my summary to change from "Chapter 13 Up" to chapter 14 instead. I mean, I go to the page and it's just - blank. Not there. It's hard to explain. My point is, as soon as I can change it I will. Also, in chapter 14 I forgot that it was indeed 14 and not 13, so ignore the beginning where it's introduced as 13. Thanks.

Sylphide

NO MORE NAME CALLING, you tell me that im now no longer allowed to call you any names after you have just called ME insane, not that i'm saying that im not, i only wrote that because the pysyc ward's nurse just walked behind me, and i get into deep ** if i don't 'admit to my illness'as she would say. anywayz no im not a Scorpio, im actually aquarius, yes i knoe, i knoe, there water and water iz supposed to be all calm, and senseul, or somefing. i think i must have gotten mixed up. i donno knoe. anywayz lets get back to the point of writing this review, no itz not because i want to encourage you ta write more, itz so as i can communicate with someone with such a superior intellect...(blah, blah, blah (can you just make beleive that i've said somefing real smart:)

so i waz finking and i think that maybe i should write something about the story, um, wait, i beta go and read it, nah just joking, i have read it and i wouldn't be reviewing it if i didn't like it, or at least i don't think i would be, it could just be to pass the time in this mental hosp... yeah i think it would be beta if i didn't tell you where i... um... worked!

So back tot he point, i really liked the story, as i just explained to my friend, wot im doing iz reviewing a story, she askes why?, i told her that you review a story so as the author will write more, so i guess that if you stop writing then i will not be able to waste time doing pointless things like reading YOUR stories, Did i just say that out loud? oh dear me, now wot do i do? i guess i could delete it all, but hey that would take sense, sense=sane insane=NOT sane, so i guess that youve told me that im unable to delete my hurtful words, ah well!

PS: this is really the only thing you need to read, i just want to say, while my meds are still strong, i loved your story, anything i said before i didn't mean, unless owt i said was nice than i ment it:)

PSS: one pointer, HURRY UP!

Whoa, awesome fic! I read it all in one time, so here's my review. This is really good, nice work with the characters - Dennis Hoffman, is one freaky character. Great plot progression...and the twist in the end...loving it. Well, I hope that you can find the time to update this soon, it's been an absolute delight. ~wave~

That was kewl! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Hello,
so now i'm not a hypo, what a compliment, but now i'm a psycho and a warewolf? well that just makes me feel so loved and other stuff, jeez, i guess that if you are gonna call me that then i betta start acting like it! so if im a psycho, how do i act? should i start speaking gibberish, coz im very goog at that, ghe jkhsu jbdj yyai k yvhzya ifggq hsy dlnw hiid hyw, do you understand all dat? you know if you can tell so easily dat im a psycho den you should be able to understand me language, correct?
well back to the point, i guess i should be praising you about your storie, once again the chapter was great, but it was a long wait, if you ask me. but yeah i did like it alot,and now dat i think of it i don't think i should be called a warewolf, maybe a impatient wolf, coz warewolf go crazy when dey moon comes out, i go crazy when you don't update soon enough.
anywayz, i cant wait for the rest, but you had better be scared coz if you don't hurry up and publish the rest ill come through the computer and maul you. MWHAHAHAHA! only joking, keep it coming, plz.
cya next time.
Abbz.