   you're just within my grasp 2007-01-19 . chapter 7UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! |
 :-{ 2005-07-19 . chapter 7 can't you change it to KR or KOC |
| ndblue123 2003-06-25 . chapter 7 Please continue! |
| someonewhocares 2003-05-18 . chapter 6 Really Really good. Can't wait for more. Please make a new one soon. The suspense is killing me. I check up everyday to see if there is a new one. Oh and I know I'm suposed to write constructive critisism and all, but I think it's just fine the way it is. Though sometimes I think Kel is a little too forgiving, but that was once and then I saw the reason. PLEASE write you next one soon,
Anonymous |
| Lona 2003-05-15 . chapter 6 Great Story Keep updatingn!!:) |
| Lady Mage Dragoness 2003-05-15 . chapter 6 Good story, though it's kinda Mary Sue, please write again. P.S. Why is it Cleon/Kel? |
| ndblue123 2003-05-15 . chapter 6 Please continue! |
 Edenrising 2003-02-25 . chapter 5Nice, much better than the 'clump'. ^_~
Later days (btw I'm doing this at school while YOU you slacker work on your science project) |
| Andrefla 2003-02-18 . chapter 5 Sorry I haven't updated in a while well heres the knew chappie enjoy |
| Caffeine 2003-01-25 . chapter 4 YES YES YES!!!!!!!!!! YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!!!
this was a good chappie though a little short so i cant wait for the next two!
keep writeing!!!!!!!!! |
| Russet W. 2003-01-22 . chapter 4 great job!! that was good! post again soon! thanx... |
| ndblue123 2003-01-22 . chapter 4 Please contiue!!!!!! |
| Caffeine 2003-01-10 . chapter 3 I do love your story and have been stalking it down and am deeply dissapoited that you have not written more What will happen next??? Huh huh!?
I cant figure it out cuz im a lazy bum so i want YOU thats right YOU to write on. Oh and it was funny when they beat up joren (hehe) kels a little bit wimpy though, but in this one she didnt train in the yamain islands so what can you expect unless she took karate but it would be weird if she did ANYWAY please keep writeing !
thanks a buldle of clean laundry!
~~Some call me LOLA |
| Sandry 2002-12-19 . chapter 3 lov your stoy but cant kel fight more than just slap? glad to know that there are more bad spellers out there I AM NOT ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep wrighting |
| Sandry 2002-12-19 . chapter 3 lov your stoy but cant kel fight more than just slap? glad to know that there are more bad spellers out there I AM NOT ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
keep wrighting |
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