While I haven't actually sat down and read the original yet, I'm really liking this rewrite. You just write everyone. . .so in-character, which is becoming a harder and harder thing to find in any fandom. I sincerely hope that you continue to the end, and that the next chapter is on its way. Because while I absolutely -loved- the ending to the second chapter, it has left me wanting more of this story. And more, and more, and more. . .

Mess-sama, don't tell me you've given up already *again.* C'mon! Update, please!! I've been waiting for ages!! This is a wonderful fic, but it'd be a thousand times better if you'd finish it!! ^_~

What a lovely quick update. I actually like what you're doing with Seifer here; he seems more rational and less maniacal. Even though I liked that a lot in the original BM, this works damn fine too.
The Fujin scene was brilliant; written with much empathy and understanding. And well, the Squall/Irvine confrontation... still powerful.

You're writing on Broken Mirror again! YES! And it's prettier than it ever was, if possible! Thanks! Your style is still piercing, maybe a little cleaner than it was (again, if possible) and I can see the differences in the characterization; it's much more extended right now. Almost makes me pity the way the game progressed as apposed to your AU.
Please keep continuing this marvellous tale, Mess!

YAAAAAAY!!! You're back! This remake/rewrite is definitely better than your old fic, but even so, I still love both versions! The typo:word ratio has lessened drastically, too! Thank you so much!! (By the way, I've recommended this fic to literally ALL of my friends!) Again, I must say thank you!

Very, very nice! You're a very talented writer....is there more? I hope so. This is really good! Does Quisty become the sorceress?

Just a little CC....there's a few type-o's in the first section. Nothing major, just a couple of things that could use correction. Otherwise, good job, and I will be back for more....count on it.