Very well written. Loved this chapter. Can't wait for more. =)

mk i cant read on because...what's the word i'm looking for? oh yes my dad will KILL me because i'm only susposto have one hour on the computer. and well i kind of have been on it sence 3:20 and it is now 6:18 so yea i think i over did the reading... and it was all on your story! i love it that much...//TOO MUCH IF YOU ASK ME// shut up pinky!! no one asked you //OH YEA? PEOPLE ALWAYS ASK ABOUT ME!// sence when? //SENCE NOW YOU DOLT// sticks and stones may brake my bones but bad words will never hurt me... //THANKS FOR GIVING ME THE IDEA OF THE STICKS AND STONES THING// Shut up!! and no you can not break my bones. //AWW WHY NOT HIKARI?// I said no and NO means NO mises!! //PLEASE??// HECK NO!!

I really like this story and I am now reading it for the third time! Took forever to find this site. could you update on kokoro no naka too?

Please continue. I love Malik centrics. They are the best next to Bakura centrics. I'd alway like to see what happens with the tarot cards and if they come to pass or not. It sounds like a struggle for Malik and I hope it doesn't end in his death. He's my favorite character.

I've been reading this story since almost the beginning, and if the next part is about Malik's dark half, then I've been looking forward to it since that first tarot reading. I'm guessing that it might be Malfoy's 'birthday party' thing that sets Malik off, or something like that.

After reading this chapter, I decided to re-read the whole thing whilst waiting for the next update, and so I know what's going on, anyways, I've finished re-reading, so it's time to update for the nice little readers ^^ ... before I forget all the important stuff x3
So, amazing story, now stop being lazy and update... please =3

This is most certainly one of the best fanfics I have ever read. It is the only one that I have read that was novel length, but I am quite glad that it has lasted so long. From what From what I have seen of the updates info, it has been about two months since the last. I do hope you will update this soon because I have been slowly dying waiting to find what that gold book will bring. Lastly this story has motivated me to reread the harry potter books (for the upteeth time), and anything that inspires me to do something is truly worth my complete attention as a fan. Anyway, goodbye, I think I am going to go look at the stories on your page now...

awesome fic can't wait for the update. so glad seto was able to get one over on Voldemort! yeah! do a little dance :)

this is getting so good i can't wait for more. is seto going to go to hogwarts? and is he going to get the rod and book? i'm so excited!!

commenting on authors note at the bottem of this chapter, I agree, not all stories have to have yaoi or any pairings, it's great to have stories that remain in character and have a good plot. This story is a good example, i'm reading it because I like it, not because it has a certain couple engaged in a romantic or cough*sexual*cough relationship.

Anyway keep up the good work.

yay youre alive!
and yay the story goes on!

*Rubs eyes*
You know, I gave up on this so much so that I didn't even bother checking back. But what's this? A new chapter? Forsooth!

Anyway, liked the way you managed to portray Kaiba and Nagini. Both are out for (more or less) their own wellbeing.

Amazing story so far. I cannot express in words how much I have enjoyed this story so far. The character development is believable, and the way that both you and White Angel wrote the yami's as humans is stunning. By the way, about the next part, is it when Malik might go ballistic? If it is, I've been waiting for it ever since the first tarot reading came out... Not that I don't like Malik or anything...

Snow ball fight with colour bombs, if only that was possible, sigh...

it's too short...NOT!
It's the qualty not quantity that counts. If it good enough to get you reading the next chapter then all you have to do is update regulary.
I love the Ouidditch shadow game...i want to play!lol

I like what I have read of this story so far. Thank you very much for giving Yugi and the other two normal wands instead of special Egyptian ones dragged out from the back of the shop. Good choice on pets, I never would have thought of it, and it fits Bakura.