I have one word for you... AWESOME! Do a sequel! PLEASE!

OMG!! THAT SUCKED!!
No offence or anything...but that was SO LAME!
Come on Rylea being Jennas twin, that just WEIRD!
The little bits of songs in the end of every chapter was nice though!

Can you say "Mary Sue"??? Go here and read up.... http://missy.reimer.com/library/guide.html

and PLEASE read this too... Mary Sue must die http://missy.reimer.com/library/guide.html#5

Please Update soon!

OMG!! what an interesting twist. keep going please!!

This is really good... I really can't wa it to see what happens next... I hope Rylea and Nick get together... it would be so cute... ^_^

Accck!!! Love this story so far. I am really enjoying your take on things. This story is exactly what you say it is "anything but ordinary" and I love it. Now to the Accck part: I can't get chapter 7 to come up. I can't wait to see how this story continues to unfold.

you've got me on the edge of my seat girl. i can't wait til the next chapter!!

Hey there, I was just waiting a bit to submit a review. I usually read a few chapters. But, I wanted to drop you a line of encouragement. (Don't take this wrong-it's not pity). I really am enjoying your story. Please don't let what one person say ruin your story. Because it is "your story." I stopped writing a story once because someone bashed me and I took it personal. Someone finally encouraged me. I finished the story and won an award for it later. I hope my encouragement can be like the one that other person gave me. Keep up the EXCELLENT work and remember....Have fun with it always!

This is really great... I can't wait for the next chapter! Poor Nicky... I wanna find out what will happen between him and Rylea...
update soon! ^_^

Good. Keep it going.

Well... this is certainly a twist... Rylea looks like Jenna?? scary... I wonder how Nick will react... please update soon!

ps: don't worry about ppl who flame you, especially if they don't leave their names, because, they probably don't even have a story posted. and if they did, it's probably not all that good either. ^_^

I'm 52 years old, I've red a lot of book (mostly in french since I am French Canadian). I love Robin Cook, Koony, Ludlum, Weber (french from France) Reich,...a lot of them. And I do like your story and I love it more since I know you're only 18 years old!! Don't you ever let anyone put you down. No one on this earth is perfect. I love your story because it's about Nick!, because it's something new (no stalker, no pairing with all of them...) and easy to read. It's a very hard story to write, because it deal with very strong emotions for Grissom, Stokes, Patterson and the team. Now, I'm waiting to see how a young girl will present all these emotions!!!! You can do it, and you can do it well. Please continue your story,
Have a peacefull wonderfull smiling day,
Franny

I can see myself taking care of Nicky boy! How will he react to Rylea? How will Griss react? How will the team help them? Poor Rylea, it won't be party time for sure!!!

Cann't wait for the rest!!! Give me more soon please

Have a nice day,
Franny

Good grief this is bad. Not even an orginal sentence in the whole thing. It's just one big cliche with a Mary Sue thrown in