that was so good! and it go Amazingly well with the song broken by amy lee and seether!I had to listen to it after I read this. good job!

Pretty good.But hearing that there is going to be a war in the wizarding war just doesnt sound right.Its like the wizarding world having an election.Know what i mean?I liked it.This is just some constructive critasisum.

OMG! it almost made me cry. i loved it almost too sweet!:);)

that was bloody brilliant you capture the emotion so well you have 2 write more story's please

Aw, so cute!

This is like every other damn ron and hermy fan fic! its getting really cheesy y cnt someone rite something different?

It was great!1

great!! it almost made me cry... honestly...

it was so sweet

*Gasp* Do they live?? AH!! Plz don't be the end!

I adored it. It was really sad, but really well written. Keep up the good work.

Very nice story, captures fear and love at the same time. I love your style, it's very unique and emotional, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Please continue to write.