"'Delita,' she breathed, her eyes filling with tears. Her hazel eyes met his gray ones. 'I am sorry too...I never stopped loving you either. I, too, will love you for all eternity.' They held each other close, their blood mingling as one, two hearts breaking, two souls leaving this world, two lovers sharing their last moments together. And then they were gone..."

In spite of Delita's machinations, it's good to see this somewhat redemptive twist on the character. That both king and queen meet their ultimate end because of their respective crimes of passion is a good twist, as well. The original game idea that Ovelia stabbed him out of anger and hate while Delita stabbed back as a final machination felt a bit too empty, anyway.

This is a moving piece of work you have got here. I really enjoyed how you protrayed the emotions of each character. I'm glad I read this.

Oh joy! I have found this fic once more!
I read this long ago at the Gaming Intelligence Agency. It was my favorite fic for a long, long time and remains one of my favorite fics to this day.
The relationship with Ovelia and Delita was just as I imagined it to be...full of passion but full of manipulative coldness as well. Your truly gave justice to the twisted character of Delita.
Ramza was no slouch either! I ached for him as I saw him through Agrias' eyes, an exhausted hero being pushed closer and closer to the edge. Those scenes when he was in a coma and no one was sure if he was going to live or die...heart-achingly brilliant.
Lastly...Olan. You focused on a much overlooked character and you did it well.
I don't see this as just another 'take a scene from the game and turn it into a fic'. It stands on its own as an exceptional piece of work!

MORE!

I really like this. Its so insightful and touching! I can't believe you've only got 4 reviews on it! For shame, people, this is quality stuff!^v^

holy ** this was good!!!!!!!!! that's all I have to say accept this.....I REALLY WISH MY WRITING WAS THAT GOOD!!! I think I may cry..........anyway I liked this story have you ever considered maybe writing a sequal to it telling about how they all settle down and stuff oh well just a thought

i read this story at icy brians page i think andi raelly relaly really really really really really (dont make me repeat it..) like it!! you should make another one to where they meet on June 1st. that would be interesting. i love the ramza/agrais paring in the story. i love those two together.^-^ write a sequel please!!!! i liekd this story lots. ^-^ ja ne
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Reading this took a lot of neglect on my part of my homework, and yet it was completely worth it.

This is very very sweet, I love the intro scene, and the kicker at the end is brilliant. Much applause there is, way to go!

Make sure you keep writing, to not do so, would be quite the crime

i guess im first...


anyway, This was a great fic!! but a tad bit long for a one shot.. but still, this was awesome! i read it in one sitting! Write another!