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GoldenPhoenix101 2007-12-04 . chapter 1
lol Great job! Nice idea too!
angel61991 2006-06-21 . chapter 3
interesting please update soon.
greetings from lala land 2005-11-18 . chapter 3
This...SUCKS

i mean, WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?! it was actually ok (ok meaning i wasn'
t about to barf and/or have a conipption caused by you're sucky ** writing) But that was before i got to chapter three. i mean, WTF IS WITH IT? it's like you lost all sense of what goes on in ramna 1/2! i mean, akane? giggling? and deciding to be 'friends' wiht ranko and shampoo?? and even before that, wtf would he have a say in? all they were freaking arguing about was shampoo glomping him, and shampoo and akane calling each other names!
but really friends? giggling? and that scene!
One fit of mad giggling later, Ranko held
out a hand to Shampoo and Akane.

"Friends?" She asked with a smile.

"Friends!" Shampoo replied eagerly and took the redheads hand.

"Oh well... friends!" Akane followed somewhat hesitantly and took
Ranko's other hand, yet her smile showed no regrets.

W
T
F?!?!?!??!?!

thats the kind of things you mock, and laugh you're asses off at! not someing to be a serious scene in ranma 1/2! god, you're suck a friggin' moron! and what the frick was with 'Malet-sama'? i mean, WHAT THE H3LL?!!?!?!? if i wasn't about to BARF from the sheer CRAPYNESS of you're fic, i'd continue reading so as to have more to say about you're 5hitty writing skills, but alas, that's not the case. it's also too bad i won't be able to curse you out propperly, with the so i'll just settle for saying this one time, that you completely and utterly SUCK, and are one of THE CRAPYEST writers i've ever had the displeasure of reading, and that you're so called 'fanfiction' is ONE OF THE MOST SCREWED UP ONES I'VE EVER READ!

Sinserely, Greetings from lala land.

and yet again, YOU SUCK
Nairojam 2005-05-13 . chapter 3
I am pretty sure than the male Ranma is the copy (cause the mirror copies don't change). And just think, its the perfect way to escape cause no one knows you are gone.
mikebreslau 2005-05-07 . chapter 3
Good one. In principle, its been done before.
In fact, it hasn't been done (completely) his time.
You have a good start and no followup in a long time.
I'm familiar with that problem, but I don't post unfinished stories...
Mike
dogbertcarroll 2004-12-14 . chapter 3
Very strange and I have no idea where you are goin' with it, but I like it.
chookee choco 2004-05-29 . chapter 3
that certainly was a nice story...
pls update soon...
i wanna know what happenes next...
and what is the pairing in this story again..?
isn't supposed to be Ranko/Ranma..?
or is it ranma/Akane..?
*sigh* i forgot!
yare yare desu ne...
anyways,,
can't w8 for the next chappies!! ^_^
Talah 2003-11-29 . chapter 3
Awsome fic. You should keep writing.
HFaith 2003-08-04 . chapter 3
heya! great fic! i had the same idea too. but i was too lazy to write it. and in my plot, ranko's secretly inlove with ranma and, moose and ryoga are falling for her. anywho, i'd love it if you would continue. oh puh-lease?
CloverWeave 2003-01-07 . chapter 3
Okay! Another one of your stories read!! Either you're really creative with your stories, or I need to go read even more than I do(I think it's the first) I've never read a take like this on the 'Ranma and curse get separated' story. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story when you get it up.
Lipana 2002-12-04 . chapter 3
You mentioned that "Clothes Make the..." influenced this story somewhat. Why do I have the sneaking suspicion that "Ranko" is the real Ranma and "Ranma" is the mirror clone?
Taiki 2002-12-04 . chapter 3
Great story! I can't wait to see what will happen next! PLease hurry! I can't wait! Ja ne!
Mark Soul 2002-12-04 . chapter 3
Hm ... just a lucky guess about the story.
I think it´s obvious that Ranko is the real Ranma, and the Ranma is the Mirror Clone.
And by judging Ranma-chan´s behavour in the first Chapter, plus mentioning a certain fic, I get the feeling that Ranko (wich means Ranma) ist staying Girl by the end of this story.
From the way the story flows now, I don´t think it will become a Ranma/Ranko Fic. I belive more that Akane gets hooked with Copy-kun.
Than again, maybe Akane misses her old baka jerk, drops Copy-kun (who is way to nice) and goes after Ranko. Much is possible in this Story.
Well, that are my thougths to this, maybe I´m totally wrong, maybe not. But I´m pretty sure that we will loose oure real Ranmas Boy-side.
edvardo 2002-12-04 . chapter 3
Interesting - the curse is lifted (kinda, anyway). We have a Ranko that is really a duplicate of Ranma, but with the ability to think, not just act; a Ranma that actually sounds like he has some functioning brain cells and the ability to use them; and an Akane that isn't, for a change, a complete nutcase pervert-basher. And having the Amazons backing off (a bit, anyway) is also pleasant. Can hardly wait for the reactions of the Delusional Duo to the current conditions...

Good stuff, keep it going!

Ed
Ran Hiko 2002-12-04 . chapter 3
When is a Ranma/Ranko fic not a Ranma/Ranko fic?
When its a Ranma/Ranko fic.

I hope that's criptic enough, because I didn't want to give anything away on the author.
I have a thought as to what is going on, story wise, and that's all I'll say on that matter.

Please keep going, I want to see if I'm right or not.

My only advise to you for this is to ask you if you have a lose plan of where this will go and then at which point it will end. i.e. achieve the point of the story. If you have, good! Just don't be to tight with it as sticking too close can lead to problems in keeping the plot running smothly, too lose and it runs away from you and is more likely never to get finnished.

This stary has a promising beginning and I would like to see it to it's conclusion. I think that's reasonable enough.

Thanks.
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