That was pretty cool. I love Caretaker stories...it reminds us how much everyone's changed in the past seven years. nice foreshadowing. :)

Write more! It's cool! I'd like to see where this leads.

cute.

Good story. ^_^ Although it was most definitely disconcerting for a Voyager songfic to be based on a BSSM song...it was originally Chibi-Usa's song, thinking about Pegasus, in case you didn't know. I liked your style, and no grammar/spelling mistakes (A+ for you!).

Good characterization! Constructive critique though ...this was mostly restating exactly what we saw during the episode. I would suggest in the future that you elaborate more into what they're 'thinking' rather than simply retelling the story. Good potential!

yay!!! that was so great! great writing, etc....great characterization...they WOULD act that way.....oooh, great job! keep up the good work!

Cool fic!

pretty nice story.

Really cool! I like that you used that song from Sailor Moon! Here's an unrelated thought: Have you ever considered writing a Voyager/Sailor Moon crossover? I would love to see one, as not too many people dare to combine the two...