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EternalLove
2009-04-05 . chapter 6
you are seriously one of the most talented writers out there. i really hope you update this story!
Ro0tin4Kagome
2008-06-03 . chapter 6
Well its been roughly 5 years since you last updated this I think I can safely say you have given up on it. haha
Well have to say it has been getting so good to just leave it now. I guess I can just hope one day you get back into it.
=D
Ro0tin4Kagome
2008-06-03 . chapter 4
YAy he said Sessha! meaning its out lovely little Kenshin from our original timeline..or atleast a similar one..[and let me say how many frickin timelines with Kenshin and Kaoru-gumi is there?] haha.
Well im frickin excited but there are is only 1 chapter left. WHY?
IrisedLuna
2008-05-25 . chapter 5
The conflicting ideas within Kenshin is a very interesting concept. Hm...

As for a comment, it seems the very end of the last scene -is- just a teensy bit forced. I'm not sure if Kaoru would cry over the leaf. Maybe her eyes would just seems sad? Or they could be glossy with unshed tears (so she's not really crying)?

I hope you can find the time to finish this great piece of work.
IrisedLuna
2008-05-25 . chapter 4
Woah! That chapter is just begging me to keep reading...even though I'm not supposed to be on-line right now.
IrisedLuna
2008-05-25 . chapter 3
I find the last scene between the two very...intense.
Hehehe, your writing is bringing out more of the fangirl in me.
But still...poor dead Tomoe.
IrisedLuna
2008-05-25 . chapter 2
Oh~ suspence. I really like the direction this is going in. Heh. Actually, your stories have been getting me back into the RK fandom.
IrisedLuna
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
How...grim. Should I expect that the story will completely deviate from Kenshin's original adventures?
everyday-snowangel
2008-05-23 . chapter 5
wow! i really enjoy this fic! i usually like the fics based on romance *im a sap, lol* but this is really good! and i really enjoy it, so please try n update as soon as you can! but don't worry no rush ^^

EveryDay-SnowAngel
FirestormAngelBlaze
2007-10-28 . chapter 5
your Ronin Kaoru series are the best things to be posted in Fanfiction so please continue!!i am sorry i didn't review your other stories but it is hard to find words worthy enough to praise your genius.you have a real flair at writing and your stories are so realistic i would rather this than the original (RuroKen.)it's hard to write with such a complicated storyline, to explain the change in characters and make it sound REAL. you, however, did just that and very sucessfully at that. i love your style because it is very mature and you never falter or go OOC. your characterizations make it easy to identify people and your writing is very detailed. it is also quite analytical - of self, of thought, motion and emotion. deeply beautiful, though a bit complex, inspirational.

Ja Ne! :D :)

FirestormAngelBlaze
speaker4thesilent
2007-10-03 . chapter 6
Very good pair of stories and an interesting idea. One tiny little problem.

You said there would be a new chapter "soon" OVER FOUR YEARS AGO!

If you want me to beg for more, that could certainly be arranged, but pleasepleaseplease don't give up on such a unique story.
aradow
2007-09-07 . chapter 6
Hmm, four years... I guess we can't expect any updates anymore can we? But it was good what I read. Just wish I could see what you had planned for the end.

Take care!
Duchessa
2007-07-31 . chapter 1
Are you planning to continue this story? I really hope you do, its so hard to find engaging fics in canon setting with this fandom (so many AUs). I've read your xholics fics (which I also really enjoy) so I know you haven't given up writing fanfics alltogether. If its not too much trouble, could you put up a notice whether this piece is abandoned or not? You're killing me in suspense here.
Sarah
2007-07-10 . chapter 6
I really really love everything that you write! I really do wish yo would write this new chapter soon. I have been waiting for it for a veryy long time and I check the site every day to see if you have posted it yet!
Wandering Hitokiri
2007-06-27 . chapter 6
Wow, this story is awesome! Please update soon, because I love this story and don't want it to die!
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