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shears
2005-02-10 . chapter 8
^^ wanted to refresh the back story, heheh.
Book Dragon: “This is getting into romance…” *Grimaces*

Bakura: *totally silent*

TombRobber: *Laughing*

Book Dragon: “Hmm… please review?”

yeah, I'm with him lolololol
Trisana Kara
2004-03-19 . chapter 1
Please do a sequel!
pruningshears
2003-08-27 . chapter 19
Rather interesting, you have my utmost praise for sparing me of any and all unnessicary fluff. THANKYOU! It was a weird twist about her family showing up, it kinda ruins ryelle's whole umm, angst character thing. And this was so completely random, "it seemed TombRobber actually liked apples, which was weird." I had to laugh. Just out of the blue. ^__^ Nice job i'm glad you didn't abandon this. And i like your new story too! Whether you do a sequel or not is your choice, but i will probably come red it if you do.
Want some ancient egyptian trivia? I believe it was in 2 thousand bce when the priests started robbing the tombs, to 'save' the treasure from defilement at the hands of thieves, uh huh, sure, So most of those robbed tombs in the pyramids we uncover were robbed by preists not plain bandits. Interesting ne? nice job! and this took so long but it was well written!
Melissa Norvell
2003-08-26 . chapter 19
Nice fic, I hope you'll review mine ^^

~Miroku Houshi-chan~
pruningshears
2003-08-23 . chapter 18
you take forever!! i was laughing so hard! real cute, so post the remainder soon! i coulda sworn you had died. hurry with the rest!
Nessie
2003-07-09 . chapter 17
You really need to write more. It's been a while since you wrote anything at all. What's the deal?
pruningshears
2003-06-06 . chapter 17
YAY! you FINALLY posted! i cant say it took forever because i kinda take forever too... -_-u anyway! absolutely great!! so sad though, so what's up with tomb robber? i thought you didn't kill him off? and one more thing are you continuing this? its really great please do! and one more thing THANKYOU! SO MUCH for not abandoning this story! i love it way too much!! post more soon!!
ness
2003-05-10 . chapter 13
I REALY like your story.I think you should realy
continue with the romance between Ryelle and
Ryou Bakura.It's realy cute...Have u eva noticed
the way i keep writeing realy?Hm..alwell.^-^ bye.
Ness
2003-05-03 . chapter 8
YOUR STORY IS AMAZING.

I love the thing you did with Bakura/yami B
and yugi/yami.
I am a total bakura/yami b fan and i tink u should
write more chapters.
The Crimson Blood Team
2003-04-11 . chapter 16
Keep going please, thats the best story I`ve read in years!!
Steph
2003-03-16 . chapter 16
Thanks for not really killing Bakura ^_^ I think this Fanfic is the best i've ever read!
xNoroix
2003-03-16 . chapter 16
Kian: HE'S ALIVE! *glomps a life-size bakura plushie*
YK: *wide grin like the tomb robber's* More blood! More gore! Hey, hikari, do you think we're allowed to turn into vampires at will?
Kian: Um...if you were on the RP boards, yes, but not you, no.
YK: @#$*!
Kian: ^_^ See, I taught my yami how to swear!
YK: They don't have to know I didn't before.
Kian: You could just read it on my fanfiction.
YK: That's right...But isn't that the reason you went on? To update it?
Kian: Yeah, but I wasn't done reading all of the new chapters of my favorites last night.
YK: You could've done that first.
Kian: OKAY, IF YOU'RE SO TOUCHY, I'LL DO IT RIGHT NOW!
YK: FINE!
Both: *sit in silence for a few minutes*
Kian: BLOD! GORE! NICE! I wish more people wrote gore...
YK: I liked that chapter where Tifa killed off Aerith in that one where Lilo and Stitch join the three...
Kian: Oh, yeah, that one? ^_^ I liked that one, it was nice and detailed!
YK: Yep! I forgot how exactly that went, though...
Kian: You're not gonna use it on Diro, are you?
YK: No! I'm gonna use it on the tomb robber!
Kian: O_O But...but...but...
YK: What's the matter, hikari? One word would do just great...
Kian: BISHOUNEN! *throws bishounen list at her yami, who catches it*
YK: Suzaku...InuYasha...Duo...Cloud...Bakura...Malik...Sesshomaru...That's nice, but-OH, HERE WE GO! THE EMBARASSING TO TELL ANYONE BISHOUNEN SECTION! Rando...
Kian: *blush*
YK: Yami Malik... O_o
Kian: *huge blush*
YK: That guy you forgot the name of from Samurai Girl Real Bout Highschool?
Kian: *horrific blush* ...I know he's kinda stupid, but this is a bishounen list, so carry on!
YK: ...Yami Bakura?
Kian: *gigantically hugely supremely horrific blush of the decade*
YK: Hehe, now I can taunt you!
Kian: @#$*!
YK: HEY! THAT ONE WAS WORSE THAN THE ONE I DID EARLIER!
Kian: Whaddaya gonna do about it?
YK: YOU @#$*&!
Kian: YOU @#$*&IN @#$*& @#$ MOTHER @#$*IN @#$*&%^!
YK: ...*passes out*
Kian: ^_^ *looks pleased*
pruningshears
2003-03-12 . chapter 16
You almost made me cry! but i knew you wouldn't kill bakura, or his yami, because thats you! ^__^ great wonderful1! i must know the end, will she go home? was she really a ghost in her own world? wha about her siblings, and how could Yami just sit there and watch bakura die?!? O_O but you captured this perfectly kudos!! wonderful *one hour later* absolutely perfect! *five days later* just marvelous! I wish i was as good as you!! please hurry and write the rest and then a sequel! ^__^ please post soon! and include what happened at home when everyone woke up to find them like that, um, if she loves bakura, and his yami wants to kill her wont that pose a small problem? or rather a gigantic one? are the yamis going to be put back or stay seperate? please hurry, i almosyt cried but i knew you couldn't kill bakura ^_^ but you did scare me for a minute, i think if i reread this i will cry, but tell you what, i am so advertising for you in my fic this is great! please post soon!! *_* if only i could come up with tstuff like this.
pruningshears (too lazy to log in)
2003-03-05 . chapter 15
AHH! evil cliffies! hurry you must post faster or the fiction gods will avenge the clify!!, ok.sorry, too much surge, anyway please HURRY! you cant leave us in suspense like this it's cruel and unusual!! she should kick yami b's a$$ GIRL POWER! yeah, sorry bout that, sugur rush again, anyway PLEASE! I'm BEGGIN U! post soon! post tomorrow!!
Yami Bakura Kia
2003-03-02 . chapter 15
WOAH! write mroe sorry I haven't been reviewing lately lots of test x_x MORE MORE MORE
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