One of the best Ultimate fics I've ever read

Fear power . . .
Continue, please? I know you won't but . . .

I like this. It's different and from alot of stuff I read here, and at the same time it has a realistic look to it. Keep it up

this is a cool story

I'm glad to see that you added another chapter. You do a good job in catching the inhumanity and intolerance of some people. I really feel bad for Horse. This was another great chapter, and as long as you keep posting, I promise to keep reading.

I'm still absolutely wow-ed by this. I really like how you tied the death of Ororo's parents with the feelings she was having for the boy who had been killed. I know you haven't worked on it in a while, but I still wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it immensely. You did a very good job at painting anguish and frustration on Devon's part. Being a kid is tough enough, but being a mutant kid is even tougher. I don't know if you have plans to continue this or not, but I would love to see more.

That was powerful, and the first fanfiction I've read in the Ultimate Marvel genre. I've just recently gotten into Ultimate X-Men and decided that I needed to find fanfiction for it. This was beautiful. I think you painted Ororo's revulsion at the act well. This is definitely going on my favorites, and now, I'm off to read the 2nd chapter.

You gotta write more on this, there's too little ultimate faictions out there, and Ororo's ma fav so thats another good reson :)

you know, at first i thought that this was a one shot deal, and it could have worked as such. It was very insightful towards he end. But as i read the to be continued, I aquiet happy that this is something that you are continuing wit. can't wait to see how it all works out.

very nicely done so far