Really excellent! This filled in a ton of gaps in the story.

I heart Lupin!

Wow...this is good - need i say more? i think you got Snape just right, the way he is so stubborn and refuses to believe any other explanations, just lets his hate for Lupin and Sirius control whatever he does..

JK Rowling's explanation for why he didn't transform in the shack was that the moon wasn't up when he entered, but i think you wrote this before she said that. and your version is so much more interesting!

i like your writing style, it is fluent and easy to read. there may be a little too much dialogue - or not enough in-between stuff, i'm not sure...if that makes sense :) but yes, well done, i liked it.

this was such a good story! i loved it from beginning to end! i love all your

stories! :) good job! :)

Snape sure is stodgy and stuck on his own narrow minded views, isn't he?

An amazing look into the mind of Snape. I adore his I'm right the world is wrong attitude, his lust for revenge...can't remember the exact quote, but I love how Snape sits there looking at McGonnagall thinking "how could she trust this monster" even though Remus has never done anything, he acts as if he has. this is a really realistic portrayal of Snape. Good work!

One of the best Snape's I've read. He is unremittingly nasty and bitter. I admire the way that you don't soften him at all, which is always a temptation with such a prickly, unpleasant character.

Wow, I dont know what to really say,except that, you did a really good job, the stuff about fixing the Wolfsbane potion was great, I never would have even thought of that, that thought never even went through my mind, why Lupin didnt transform till the clouds shifted away from the moon. Anyways, great job, think mabye (sorry bout my spelling)you could write one from Lupin's pov?

This was very good. The only real criticism I can make is one involving Halloween night: Snape was in Gryffindor Tower when he heard about Black's breaking into the castle (along with Dumbledore, McGonagall, and Lupin). Other than that, the story is perfect!

Wow! That was great! I luved it!

Oh my god...it's just too good. It reminds me why I love Snape so much...he's simply the most interesting, complex character around. Lupin may be a nice, all-around-wonderful guy, but reading about him never does anything for me because there's nothing there to identify with. Not to offend any of his many, many fans, but he's always seemed sort of like a male Mary Sue to me. But Snape's desire for revenge and glory, his long-held grudges, his firm belief that all his actions were justified...it's all so real, and you write it so well. You must be very talented to pull it off.

there is something in my tooth.

but no matter.

I very muchly enjoyed this story- it was an excellent reason [it was actually a likely reason, and it made a lot of sense] for Remus tranforming later in the moonlight.

I *would* give you some critism, if I could, but you are light years ahead of me in this area and there is honestly nothing I would like to criticise.

the characterisation was wonderful, too.

oh...I just really loved this story. I think I read the league against voldemort months ago [it was written months ago, right?] but I shall read it again.

yay.

schnoogles to you.

Excellent to print out and bring for my night shift, I must tell you. I liked this a lot, you've captured Snape's soul pretty good. I like the balance between his lust for revenge and honour, and the fact that he *did* believe he was doing the right thing. Am I the only one who felt sorry for Snape during the end of PoA?

ooooooooh. nice. quite nice. Your Severus portrayal is absolutely /beautiful/. In character till the last bit. I really like all the scenes with him 'n Minerva pissing each other off.

Wonderful! Snape's point of view is truly unique. You captured his very essence in this piece, it was just so *him*. Everything he said and thought and did was done perfectly; especially his obsession with revenge agaisnst the Marauders and how it led him to be so blinded in the shrieking-shack scene. You also adressed many of those odd plot-holes JK seems to have forgotten in PoA, and did a better job in covering them smoothly than she ever did (or maybe she will later on). I've read, and loved, many of your Lupin pieces, and I keep catching these subtle little references to a person I believe is named Andrea, who used to make the Wolfsbane potion for Remus (particularly in End of the Tunnel). Will we get a story going into that? ::doe eyes:: I love your work on Lupin, keep it up!

I read this long ago, but someone on a mailing list reminded me of it, and I've enjoyed it just as much the second time around. It's a superb rendering of Snape's POV. Thanks for a marvelous job.