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Ganheim
2009-07-06 . chapter 1
Akane actually managed a bit of sympathy for the possibility that he was paying the price for something he hadn't even been aware of doing.
[Although that’s not highly likely, I think it’s within the realm of her character]

on with this, ne?"
[Unnecessary Japanese]

Anytime anyone ever told him not to be somewhere, not to do something, he would always take it as part insult, part challenge, and defy the instructions he had been given. This was no exception.
[That _is_ Ranma, most of the time]

the nurse showed him his newborn...
...kitten.
With a scream that could be heard throughout Nerima, Ranma tore out
of the delivery room.
[That is so…disturbing. I’m still trying to figure out if it’s a result of Shampoo’s Jusenkyo curse or something else…]

one wonders how often the tribe might have run afoul of the PRC's 'one family, one child' policy)
[It’s not popular among _any_ of the peoples of China, really, as it goes against the typical ‘large family’ ethic inherent in the history and cultures]

I had to use that old "You-got-me-pregnant-while-you-were-in-neko-ken-mode" trick again (I should copyright that by now ^_^;;)
[That’s an old one? I’d never heard of it before]

Y'know, after that, Laughing Target doesn't seem half bad anymore...
[I’ll have to check that out. This was concise and creepy, but by no means bad. Of course, I have to point out that a plot hole remains in that I’d think if Shampoo was impregnated in her cat form that she’d have remembered that – and that’s the impression I get (Shampoo was pregnant and that’s why they got Ranma to marry her, but then there’s the question of how Ranma would think he got her pregnant later if that was how they got him to agree…)]

That was so odd, that I'm _still_ not entirely sure what to think. Fair job, though.
Ashura Ayanami
2003-08-15 . chapter 1
Oh god... And I thought I was sick. I like, I like. LMMFAO!! Like dogbertcarroll said, "That's just wrong!" lol..

"Being perverse is bad!" *cute picture of blonde girl*
Meiyo
2003-04-18 . chapter 1
whe! -^_^- i love this fic! please continue-are you still alive in there?
dogbertcarroll
2003-03-28 . chapter 1
LOL. That's just wrong!
taxzombie
2002-12-03 . chapter 1
Good short, got a kick out of it. Have to check out some of your other material.

WARNING - bad pun ahead -

Although it looks like Ranma has grounds for an annulment; after all it appears that Shampoo was out catting around.
Tuxedo Baka
2002-12-02 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

Laughed out loud so hard I almost got caught by the boss, even though I knew it was coming. That's a sign of damn good writing.
Elusion
2002-12-02 . chapter 1
*explodes into fits of laughter* Hehehe. Ahem.

Nice. I'd have to say this is definately one of the most original fics I've read so far. You might have made it a bit more surprising if you had left out a little of the foreshadowing.
HarmonyAk
2002-12-02 . chapter 1
Man, you'd think the ultrasound would've caught *that*! Stupid, incompetent obstetricians :-)
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