Your story is haunting ... it explains so much about Cordelia's attitude during "Rain of Fire". You've given more insight into her character with one story than Joss managed to with a whole season. Wow.

amazing. I never imagined any sort of plausible explanation coming into being for Cordelia's tryst with Connor. it's actually very sad and poignant, the experiences that you create in this story. appropriate title, too.
keep writing.

- panda

Hauntingly beautiful. Perfect.