Maiqu 2007-06-12 . chapter 1aww |
KrazyKarah 2002-12-20 . chapter 1More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
sickyoungchick 2002-12-03 . chapter 1mmm...this is really interesting...I've been trying to remember if I've read a story that starts with them already together yet, and I don't think I have, so good on you...it's nice to have something original, even though I like to think that every story is original in its own way...my only question is, where do you go now??? Is it supposed to just be a short fic??? Or are you gonna do something terrible, like put him in a car accident that almost kills him so that he's in a coma, and she sits by his bedside and remembers how they got together?? That's not a suggestion...although you can use it if you like...I was just speculating out loud...well...I'll be checking back to see if you make any changes....:D |
hasapi 2002-12-02 . chapter 1lol. it's adorable. i love it. :) great story, good writing...hope to see more of your work soon. |
Jade-Tessier 2002-12-02 . chapter 1awww! how sweet :) keep writing :) |
To lazy to sign in 2002-12-02 . chapter 1 Very cute! I hope you continue it! |
misty 2002-12-02 . chapter 1 awww !! how cute! i love it! |
poohbear 2002-12-02 . chapter 1aww, i love this one. please continue. make one up of new years eve, valentine's day, easter or something. it was really good. :) |
m 2002-12-02 . chapter 1 that's so sweet. more please. |