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| Mrs Hatake Itachi 2004-11-24 ch 9,  | abuseNice story!! I like it so much!! Keep up the good work!! |
| shep-shep 2004-09-12 ch 9, | abuseOMG! i hate you so much rite now! I feel like killing YOU! i know its only a story but stil! Sara - gone Greg - gone Nick - Heartbroken Living in California Warrick - Las Vegas Homicide Catherine - Seattle Grissom - Miami I HATE YOU SO MUCH RITE NOW! |
| deedle1 2003-05-06 ch 9, | abuseThis was a sad and very hearted story. It made me cry more than once. It was happy, but sad at the same time. This was a very good one. I can honestly say that this is the sadest FF I have every read. I loved it. Bye. |
| OneLastRefrain 2003-04-05 ch 1, | abuseJax, Hey!! Great job with the story. It brought tears to my eyes. Keep up the great work and I look foward to reading more CSI fics from you. Ill talk to you soon. Nikki |
| greglovr 2003-03-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg! this is just too sad.i love greg and sara's so cool! how could u kill them both.never make greg the bad guy again, he's too cute, sweet, and funny to be. and to make up for it have a romance with sara and greg! |
| Britney 2002-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG u r without a doubt the BEST writer on the face of the planet!! i LUV ur story & u MUST keep writing!! |
| nikki2 2002-12-20 ch 9, | abusejax!!! you're wonderful! you've inspired me to write, you're my role model thank you for writing this story it is *the* best one i've ever read you've made me cry you've made me laugh its been a blast thank you from the bottom of my heart!! you are the BEST author ever! |
| fawkes21 2002-12-19 ch 1, | abuseI'm telling you, your story is still more depressing then mine. LOL! At least I haven't killed off any major characters...yet ;-) Seriously, I loved the whole story, and I love the epiloogue. It was so sad! You had best get going on a new story - think you could keep Greg alive in the next one? And not mean? :-) Thanks! Again, great job and keep up the awesome work! |
| Kelly 2002-12-19 ch 9, anon. | abuseNow that I can go online (I'm at school before u get here!!) My mom and I (lol) think that ur story is GREAT!! We love the story and think that you should keep writing more!! Don't forget to send me updates over Christmas Break!! If I don't get them I will be calling!! lol!! I LOVE THE STORY!! |
| ACatFiend2 2002-12-19 ch 9, | abuseOkay, here goes. I agree with Jessica S. I think you lost something when you started composing so quickly - so what, we all do. Walk, don't run, when you have a good idea but can't flesh it out. I have to admit it has taken me 7 years to deal with a family member's death so the one year doesn't seem so far fetched as it might. But I have a separate ending! |
| Mooose 2002-12-18 ch 9, | abuseTears were freely falling by the time I got Warrick arrived...it's been such a long time since a written work had this effect on me. Can't wait for your Christmas story...please don't make it as heart-wrenching as this one. :) |
| Stoked 2002-12-18 ch 9, anon. | abusethis epilogue is by far the best thing you have ever written, and although it is sad it is still definately some of the best fanfiction i have ever read. well done |
| Jane Doe 2002-12-18 ch 9, | abuseI thought your ending was fitful. Thanks for the epilogue by the way. Too bad they all split up but it's more realistic that way. We all know they differ in dealing with there feelings about Sara so I really liked it. I can't wait for your next story! Please keep writing! ~Jane |
2002-12-16 ch 8, anon. | abuseNooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...sara!!!!!!! why god why? |
2002-12-16 ch 8, anon. | abuseI can't believe you killed Sara!! Good story though. |