haha! OMG! This was hilarious! *dies with laughter* I loved the part where they went shopping for the leather and then the underwear! HAHA! I'm crackin' up here! And it was not a pitiful attempt! It was actually good! I love it! I'm adding it to my fav's list.

WPY

I LOVE THE WAY THIS WAS WRITEN, it was buetiful and flowing, just i got confuesd as to who yuya was. i was thinking it would be nice to have a background in the begining to help. i want more discription of Yami other then he is a cutie and his clothing at the end of the story. some more discription of yuya whould not hurt as well. i liked the discription in the begining of her brusheing her hair right be fore the yugi came in.

nobody can replace yuugi! *muahahahahahahah* sorry bout that, but I LOVE yuugi...

Evil sisters...how sad...I only have one sister... she's my TWIN... she's evil... I have a question for you, if you had an IDENTICAL twin, what would you do? in my opinion, the purpose of an identical twin is to freak you'r parents out and cause mischeif because if they catch you doing something and you get away they can't tell if it was you or you'r twin, so what does my sister do? She dyes her hair and gets colored contact lenses and she didn't dye her hair a normal color,she died it PLATNUM BLOND with DENIM BLUE highlights, so we don't even look alike because my hair is relatively dark. So now I couldn't be mistaken for her in a dark alley. I even tried to get my mom to let me dye my hair but the only thing I got were a few blond highlights. About you'r writer's block, try writing another story for a while and when you need insperation for that story you'll get insperation for this story. I dunno, it could also screw up you'r life. I'd write more but my sister (the evil brat) wants to use the computer, so buh-bye!

GOOD CHAPTER! I have a cold, which is really depressing 'cuz I just got off for winter break (yeah my school scedule is really messed up, we got off FIVE days before christmas, what's weirder is that school starts at 7:40 am and ends at 1:50 pm, so I basically have to get up at 6:30 in the morning) and you just shouldn't get sick during winter break because there are no benifits, it's not like you get a day off school, the only benifit is that you don't get have to do the pesky holiday homework (I really don't have that much homework I have a history project due but I finished it, I only have my dumb science project thing to work on and that's due in Febuary) and colds mess with my head so I act all timid and nice and stuff,I think up weird things when I have colds,and have freaky dreams (I had this really freaky dream where Yami turns into Mai, it was WEIRD) and then my mom gives me wierd pills nd medicine and stuff(it freaks me out, my mom has like millions of bottles of pills if I tell her I have a cold she comes out with 10 bottles of medicine and 30 bottles of pills so she says "take a swig of this" or "okay, take ten of these" that's the hole reason I never fake sick ) yeah, I'm sorry about my persistance on the Yuya/Yami romance thing, you'r right it's not like you can fit that in the day they meet, I just like to complain and rant about stuff. I'm glad someone else noticed the diferences between the Harry Potter movie and the Harry Potter book they left out a LOT of stuff and everyone I know keeps on saying "It's SO true to the book" but it's NOT. I wouldn't go see the second movie for it though, they left out way too much and the way they potray the basilisk is just WRONG.Oh well I have to go, and that wasn't a rant in my opinion and I'm not reviewing 'cuz I want more Yuya/Yami romance, I'm reviewing because you'r story is GOOD, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise.

ooooooooo that's AWESOME! If you review then you get a chapter! _ you are so cool! _ don't ask...

_ oooo dies Yuya like Yami? :p yay! _ THis chappie is for mwe! ::giggles like a chibi on a sugar high::

Okay I didn't really mean what I said about Seto. I'm kinda somewhere between like and dislike, I dilike him more than I like him but I don't hate him, confusing ne? Yeah I was in a bad mood when I wrote that, I had a really bad day and my favorite chocolate ice cream gave me brain freeze... RETURN OF THE DOT-DOT-DOT THING!MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!ON WITH THE RANTS! How the hell does Yami get his hair stand up like that?On TV there's this women who dies her hair green, puts christmas tree ornaments in her hair, and shapes it like a christmas tree every christmas, but she still can't compete with the weirdness of Yami's hair! How does he die his hair that way anyway?THREE COLORS!IT'S FREAKIN' UNNATURAL! Yup I had yet another bad day today,and I'm in a bad mood, do you want to hear about it?You don't? Too bad!YOU DIDN'T DO AS I SAID SO NOW I MUST RANT AND RAVE ABOUT THINGS YOU DON'T CARE ABOUT!I have a kleptomaniac for a friend, she steals things and then she tells me about it, it's WEIRD... she told me to steal a seal statue off of my history teacher's desk and she kept on telling me "steal the damn seal" and I kept on telling her I had a conscience and then at the end of class I told her to steal it so she tried to but the teacher was RIGHT THERE so she couldn't.Later on she told me that she had already stolen a lot of things from the teache like a stapler, paper,pencils, markers...etc. I still hate my history teacher by the way, I have voodoo dolls of her that I have made out of pure spite, I thought they didn't work but then she MYSTERIOUSLY broke her leg and we had to get substatute teachers that were ALSO idiots...I wonder if they were her friends... my kleptomaniac friend stole some fake nails...I tried them on but then a friend of mine who I will called Jessie (Jessie is a girl, but that's not her real name, I'm not using her real name 'cuz I really don't know if she goes on fanfiction net.) was in a bad mood so my kleptomaniac friend and I let her wear the fake nails cuz she was in a bad mood."Why was she in a bad mood?" you may ask, well if you were someone else I would say "It's a long story" but you are someone who I have told I would write a long review/rant for if they didn't write more Yami and Yuya romance (which you didn't)so I will tell you the story. Ok this Jessie used to date a guy called Nick ( yet again, that's not his real name) well, Jessie has a best friend called Carrie (yet again not her real name) and Nick asked Carrie out (y'know OUT as in DATE) and Carrie agreed. Well Carrie asked one of her friends if she looked good for Nick, well the friend that asked that told Jessie and Jessie called Carrie some names, threatened to kill her... etc. So then Carrie and Jessie had a fight... I watched the Hobbit today in language arts and Carrie and the boy who sit next to me in that class both fell asleep, while Jessie pointed out things that happened in the book but didn't hapen in the movie... Carissa drooled in her sleep... she was probably thinking about Nick... there's this boy who is a friend of Jessie and he's scared of me... I think it was all the evil laughter and stuff...WHOOPS I GOTTA GO! Y' see I have this thing called a life... I rarely use it... that review was shorter than I planned but I can't waste my time telling you all the horribly boring things that happen in my life.

mon gurl! I need a new chapter! pweese? ::big Yugi puppy eyes::

hiya again!

sup up? the story's a lot easier to read now... and it's good, so don't worry too much bout flames. and seriously, i gotta agree with you, if you're bored with a story, don't read it! (least till there's a lot of chappies so the plot hopefully is there...) keep up your great work, and thank you soooooooo much for actually updating regularly!

kirsta

ps. oh yeah and about the rudolph thingie... don't worry... me and my friends were on the bus comming back from a marching band showcase and started to sing "the wheels on the bus" and started modifying it... it all started with "the people on the bus go up and down"... and we're supposed to be GT students... and freshmen!

boxers! LOL hurry with the chapter! PLEASE! THANKZ

::laughs:: You'll use the ones I said, right? Oh yeah! GO Yuya! Kill kaiba! _ oh, wanna hear a kewl kiaba quote I found on Kaibacorp? It's " I'm here to chew bubble gum and kik ass, and I'm all out of bubble gum." it was in the orignal Japnese series. I gotta use that quote! :p

ARGH! IM SOOO SORRY I HSVEN'T REIVED! I HAD TO SNEAK ON HERE! I musta caught your cold... ::sniff:: This chapter is for me? I feel so loved! AND you used my name! _

Okay, if you insist so much...How about black boxers with little Magician of Black Chaos in them. *LOL at the thought*

well, lets see...he should wear boxers, 'cause he's a manly-man, right?