That's so sad.. :{ Why couldn't you have them in a dream state?

Hi

This was really good. It brought a tear to my eye. Read some of your other work and it is all really great.

Sandra

Aw...just beautiful.

Hey you know what, after reading your latest signed review, thought I'd check out your fic. Not with the intension of insulting it, but out of sheer curiosity.

Congratulations, I've just read my first and last M/L fic (other than Scarlet's) and I liked it in a pull out my teeth kinda way (the home dentistry being the M/L factor of course, but you gotta expect that from a M/A). That's a complement by the way.

It was well written and even gave me shivers up my spine as I read it. Of course, I'm not changing shipper camps for it, but I appreciate the quality. It's good to see a writer who can not only string coherent sentences together, but do it well. Be they M/A, M/L, M/Z, K/Z...

Sorrow R.

*whimper*

Very sweet, romantic and well written. Looking forward to exploring your other fics.

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. my jaw dropped at the last line. that was so sad but brilliant i LOVED that! FANTASTIC!!!!

ME

Really sad but wonderfully written. Great job.

Aww, bittersweet. *Sob* poor Logan, poor Max.

OOOH that was good! Nicely done, nicely done!coolness that wad really good loved it.

Very interesting. I am yet to know the exact specifics of the challenge, so I'm going on a bit of a limb here.

I'm only not able to fully enjoy this in that there's a question nagging me. Did she kiss Logan because there really was a very short temporary cure?
Or did she need to kiss him good bye before she died?

Really, it boils down to, what about Logan?

Or at least, that's what's bothering me.

Beyond that, I think I've enjoyed this piece. Densley packed with very descriptive imagery and content. This piece may lack things, but that is certainly not one aspect found lacking.

Best wishes!
-V.M.

Hooo, spooly! but good write more M/L awesome idea too.

Saw on CH that you had posted this, so I had to pop in and review. Gosh but I love this! We all just kept on waiting and waiting for Max to say those words to Logan to his face, instead of to herself in the front seat of an old car, and maybe this wasn't the happiest of circumstances, but still . . . Awww. (Sniffle!)

I've been patiently waiting for you to post this, just so I could add it to my favorite stories list.

I loved it the first time I read it, abregaza. I still do. It can still make me teary no matter how many times I read it.

Brilliant job. Beautiful characterizations and what a twist! Even if halfway through I already saw it coming. ;)