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MidnightTimberWolf
2003-07-16 . chapter 5
I liked the story... So heart wrenching and sad but also filled with hope and love... I liked the Idea about the jewel being converted into jewels and placed in the forhead... I hope you continue with the story at least add another chapter to it for all of here at the office...
Peace
MidnightTimberWolf
2003-07-12 . chapter 2
I'd have to say that this is one hell of a story... WE all enjoyed it, and can't wait til the next chapter(s)... Keep up the good work... Peace
Kagome15
2003-04-02 . chapter 5
PLEASE WRITE MORE VERY SOON!!
Mikky
2003-02-04 . chapter 5
Continue!! It's good... OH! I feel so sad for Kagome!!! But why don't you write about Inuyasha's life without her too? It's just an idea! Mikk¥®
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XwiccanX17
2003-02-03 . chapter 5
hey.. nice story... i really hope inu and kagome wind up together.. lovely plot.. i dunno about the student thing though... lotsa people doin that.. but hey. its your story. i'll read it no matter what ^_^ hehe its really good. okay well i hope you get the next chapter done, i'm really looking forward to it! oh and i think it was cool how u put that tattoo thing and everything. really nice.

~XwiccanX17
Kitsune Seven
2003-01-18 . chapter 5
Now that was definitly interesting! I liked the groups reaction in the mall when they felt the "tatoo" on Kagome's forhead. And I personally am torn between the two ideas of the new student. There are so many fics where InuYasha winds up going to Kagome's school. But, what on Gaia would a girl have to do with any of it... Well, that's just me... Ja!

~Chrono
Mikky
2003-01-05 . chapter 4
SOoooooooooooo sad...... I want mooore!!!!
Serah
2002-12-31 . chapter 3
^_^
I rally can't think of anything you need to improve on (which is a good thing! I tend to notice really small, unimportant things and yell at people for them...j/k)! This is a really great story! And if you can't already sense my jealousy, let it be known. I cannot write... But this was a really great chapter! I feel so sorry for Kagome... And Inu... And Shippo... and everyone else... Sometimes I'm just too sympathetic!! But I really liked the end, with Kouga and Kagome! Normally I don't like Kouga, but in this story he's just so... don't know... Well portrayed (I'll stick with that), and I really think you wrote his character very well. ^_^ But that's just how I feel! I culd go on and on about the greatness and all that of this chapter, or this fic entirely, but I don't want to waste anyone's time. So, Keep Writing and UPDATE SOON!

*~¤~*Serah*~¤~*
Laurie4
2002-12-30 . chapter 3
I really liked that chapter a lot!! ^_^
Great job on writing it and I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Yuu's_the_man
2002-12-30 . chapter 3
I just read chapter 3. It's pretty cool. The part with Kouga and Kagome wasn't bad at all. But where was Inuyasha the whole time and where was sess that he would leave 'his' Rin all alone?
But I like it. More soon.
yuu's_the_man
2002-12-30 . chapter 1
This sound's like an OK story. I'll just have to read and find out.
Kitsune Seven
2002-12-30 . chapter 2
Wow! This is really cool! I like it a lot! Hmm... Man I hate this... Almost every time I read a story of yours, I get some ideas about what might happen! Like, maybe Kagome and InuYasha well, um, ::cough cough:: are "together" durring the night, and then Kagome goes and leaves and the whole heart attach thing happens, and then Shippo might get killed or something, and then Kagome winds up pregnant, and the child becomes the reincarnation of Shippo. Maybe... I don't know! But hey, if you want, you could always use that idea in another fic if ya want. NEways, gotta fly! Ja!

~Chrono
Serenity Ceris
2002-12-29 . chapter 2
I really your story!
Keep up the great work!!!
I hope you update soon, I can't wait to read
the next chapters!!!
DarkGoddessAluthri
2002-12-27 . chapter 1
Hey, love the story so far. The only Problems with it:
(a) You can't reach the 3rd chapie from the 2nd chapie
(b) The 2nd chapie is the same as the 3rd chapie.
Other than that I can find no faults and I hope you will update it soon. I would like you to know that I like your story so much it has been added to my fav. stories list.
Laurie4
2002-12-27 . chapter 2
that was SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!! That was seriously the best Inuyasha story I have ever read!! I can't wait until you update!! ^________^
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