This is a great story and I really loved it. You are really good with describing the relationship between Trip and Archer. I like the fact that they are so sure of each other, they know they can trust nomatter what, and Archer knows Trip will be honest with him if he asks.

Archer has two roles to play with Trip; Friend and Captain. It was good to see Archer's uneasyness with having to discipline Trip, and Trip being secure enough in their friendship to handle it.

Lovely story. Well done.

Great story, again!!! I love your writing, as you are tops on my favorite authors list.

Sorry to hear about 'Shanghaied'. It really makes no sense as to why they would pull that one. It really wasn't explicit, and actually much tamer than a lot of other stories that I have read here (I am not a huge fan of SLASH). Well I will have to check out the other site, because I don't want to miss out on any of your stories!!!

Thank you again for another fabulous tale!!

Very nice. There is some wonderful discription in this chapter. Don't take this wrong way, but I wanted to say that I think you have really improved as a writer... keep it up.

Great ending to a great story (as usual).

I hope you'll reconsider posting at ff.net. I found your stories here for the first time after all and it's always exciting when I open the page and see a new story or update from you. I'll try to remember to check out the enterprisefanfiction group though to look for your work.

You have a way with our impetuous Chief Engineer. I look forward to your next story.

I just wanted you to know that I LOVED this story and all of the others you contributed to FanFiction.net. I love the interaction you write for Archer and Trip. They're my favorite characters on the series.

I'm sorry to hear you won't be contributing to FF.net anymore, but I certainly understand your reasons why. So...just WTF is FF.net all about that they removed "SHANGHAIED"? The creeps. Oh well, I knew this site would go puritan and oh so boring after they pulled all of the NC-17 stuff.

Thanks for the suggestion on the other newsgroup. I'm a member of other groups (think I've seen you around ), so I'll be looking for your GenFic stories at enterprisefanfiction@yahoogroups.com.

All the best! And THANKS for sharing your excellent stories with us! Do you have a web site where you store all of your fiction?

Thank you for yet another wonderful story! Bummer about your other story being pulled. I thought that was a great tale as well. I sincerely hope you continue to post to ff.net as I always look so forward to your latest Trip adventure. Your writing of the Archer/Trip friendship is always right on the mark and your stories are always well-written. I thoroughly enjoy them each and every time! Thank you!

at first i was startled by his transporting down to the planet but then again this is the same trip who went and told a vulcan that he had read one of her letters .

and jon didnt see it then either but trip felt he had to do it because it was the right thing to do.
just like now he feels like he has to do this .. to warn nes that her secret is out because it is the right thing to do in his mind.

i am a little suprised he was able to get travis to go along and i cant wait to see how phlox reacts to this.

Ack!! What is Trip up to now? Great chapter and now I really can't wait to see where this is going. Good job.

Poor Travis! What a position Trip put him in! I know that Trip said he trusted Archer, and not Cly, but what was he thinking? He really can be stubborn, I guess.
I was surprised by this turn of events, even though I knew there had to be more to the story than the nice neat ending it looked like it was headed for. Thanks for keeping this great story going!

To quote the ever sexy Trip Tucker... "Are you serious?" Did you seriously write this? And if so, why aren't you employed by Paramount?

This is by far the best story I have read in fan fiction. Aside from a few typos, well, they aren't even worth mentioning. Everything I look for in a fan fiction is in this story, except an ending of course. I swear to God if you pull a bored-with-this-story-now-so-I-won't-bother-finishing-it, I will have to kill you.

I would list all the things I like, which I usually do, but this review would turn into a novel. I appreciate your excellent writting, and really, really, look forward to the ending. I know this review is really of no critical value, but I promise to be more in-depth with further reviews- as more chapters are churned out by you. I would have reviewed earlier in this story, but I wanted to keep reading, not stop and praise. Please forgive me.

SpaceCowboy.

OH WOW!!! very well done on all fronts! From T'Pol and Archer, to Cly and
Archer, to Travis and Trip being stupid!

Most excellent please don't make us wait so long for the next part.

Well that was unexpected!!!! Great turn of events, especially getting Travis involved. Can't wait to the continuation, but that will have to be in the New Year, regardless, since I have no internet access while visiting family. Aaaagh!!!

I really loved the beginning of this chapter - the conversation between Archer and T'pol. I could totally see it in my mine, and it really made me laugh (especially the cricket comment)

Thanks and keep doing such a great job.

Merry Christmas, and Happy New Year!!!

"An obviously emotional cricket." That line was GREAT! So funny!

So, Trip remembers at least most of his chat with Archer. You portrayed his reactions well. I'm sure he would feel relieved that the secret was out in the open as well as somewhat betrayed by the way Archer questioned him. But, it's hard to stay mad at your best friend as long as the apology is sincere.

Your reactions from Cly were right on as well. He knows what Archer says is probably true, yet doesn't want to believe it without hearing it from his sister. Good job.

What the heck is Trip doing? Transporting?!?! Oooh, such a cliffhanger!

Bad, bad Chianna for not telling you sooner how much I've been enjoying this story. Good cliffie. Hope you resolve it soon.