 Robin Moto 2008-11-04 . chapter 38Wow. Just wow. This is deep, and dark and sad, but strangely hopeful. I really enjoyed reading, really enjoyed all the different POVs and you've gotten them so true to form, so in character that this is an amazing story. |
 ocean's pebble 2008-10-14 . chapter 38Holy. Freaking. Crap. This story is amazing. I started crying somewhere around the middle, and I had to stop and just breathe so many times in this story... Dude. I am speechless with awe. Complete an utter awe. I have a distinct feeling that this is going to end up a story that I will read many times, and it will always make me cry.
You are Awesome.
I can't think of anything else that really fits. |
 Shuggie 2008-04-20 . chapter 38This was an excellent story. You did a wonderful job exploring the depths of the relationships Pietro shares with the other characters. I also loved all of the references you added in, the Godfather, Cats, and Santa Claus is Comin' to Town in particular. I must admit, I was quite upset with Erik being made into the ultimate bad guy here. I'd hate to think of him doing those things to his own son, but his redemption with Johnny is a nice turn. You're a very good writer, and I wish you luck with your future projects. |
 QuinnAstaire 2008-02-11 . chapter 38I keep re-reading this fic religiously. It’s beautiful. I know that’s a predictable response, but I think everyone else pretty much described the godliness that is the mind-boggling read.
We laughed we cried and you can rest easy knowing you caused a massive collection of people sleep deprivation, much love to you and your awesome writing skills x |
 MINX loves this story!!! 2007-09-21 . chapter 38 Wow...that... wow.
That was REALY good! I loved it! It was so sad but it had a happy ending and stuff. I really like Pietro's relationship with both Wanda and Johnny. My only constructive criticism is that I though that Pietro and Johnny should have had a moment where Johnny remembers the end of the Mungojerrie and Rumpelteazer rhyme. But even so, BRAVO! I was very incredibly impressed. I applaud your wonderful writing skills.
*applauds*
Well, I could go on for a long time saying good stuff about this story and your talents as a writer, but 'tis getting late as I have spent much of the night reading this(good thing I'm a night person). Well, Keep up the great work! |
 Stevie 2007-08-05 . chapter 38 That was the best fanfic I've ever read!*sniff* |
 Forcefully Jaded 2007-06-25 . chapter 38I can't really express the way I feel about this story. Well, I can, but I don't think it's quite strong enough: I love it. I'm ecstatic that you are continuing a career of writing, because you are definitely to become a rising star of modern literature. Your stories are suprising, poignant, and utterly understanding of the trials one must bear.
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. |
 StarDust002 2007-06-23 . chapter 38 The only story to have made me cry. It was a beautiful beginning to end, and I couldn't have enjoyed it more.
It was a truly magnificent piece and very well written - props to you in the world of fandom who writes without losing plot, meaning, feelings, and of course, proper grammar.
I will continue to enjoy this story for many more years to come and I highly and eagerly anticipate what you may write in the future... |
 Valoofle 2007-02-10 . chapter 2I just wanted to tell you that I'm adding this story to my C2 community about Pietro and Wanda, entitled "The Love/Hate Relationship." If you have any objections, just email me. And I adore this story still. |
 MePo 2007-02-02 . chapter 38*applauds*
The only story which ever came close to makig me cry. Perhaps the saddest one I've ever read... and the best angst story I've seen. Well done. |
 TheDreamerLady 2007-01-28 . chapter 38Beautiful! I like, I like, I like... Um, yeah! It's been a very long story(and sometimes I feared it wouldn't be finished) and I'm slightly sad that it's completely done now... but it was a good run, and I'll definetly keep checking back to see what you write.
I hope you get to become an author with printed books and the like. I'd come to a book signing!
amanda and Lanco(the duck) |
 Valoofle 2007-01-15 . chapter 38Ew, Wanda and Lance... but what a sweet ending! Yay... I feel like I should cry because I remember first reading this back in the day when there was only a couple of chapters and I was a wee tyke, and now it's all grown up... sniffle. I loved the description of the sun coming up paralleling the life thing. I commend you |
 Yellowfur 2007-01-11 . chapter 38Oh my freakin' god.
I love this story. I am so sad to it over. But, at the same time, utterly lifted at the pleasant, high-hopes-inspiring ending.
Your writing amazes me. I have to check out at least another fanfic of yours.
Byebye. |
 ChaosLady 2007-01-10 . chapter 38 Beautiful. Absolutly beautiful. No other words can describe it. |
 Renice 2007-01-10 . chapter 38Oh no, thank you for this wonderful story and sharing it with all of us. I cheered every time I saw that it had updated and hugged the computer if it had been a long time between updates. Your stories are a joy in my life, even the sad ones and I hope to see much more from you in the future.
All the best my friend,
Ren Cedars |