 BrokenForEternity 2008-09-08 . chapter 1I never thought of this pairingbefore but I like it.
Can I put this fic on my C2 archive? |
 DebbieB 2006-04-03 . chapter 1Okay, I admit I blew this story off the first time I read it. After reading your Taylor story, though, I decided to give it a second try. I still don't completely buy the characterization of Sookie, although I think it's an interesting take. Personally, I don't know how Sookie would handle having a thing for Lorelai--I don't think she'd harbor quite as much resentment toward Luke. Sookie's heart is too big and soft to hate somebody like that. I think she'd probably turn it back on herself, pour all that doubt into her low self-esteem. And I really can't see her as quite so manipulative. But then, maybe what we see is part of that lie you mentioned in the title. I just...sniff...hope not, because I love my Sookie... |
 thefictionalfreak 2006-02-23 . chapter 1wow very well written. I must say you wrote it so well, I could almost believe that Sookie could be living a double life... like siriously... but alas I know she is not... but still. very well written! Love your writitng style. It makes it all the better. You have a great talent. I really like the way Sookie talks about them growing old together, like of course they are. cause they are best friends. and the whole Luke thing. wow great. So very original story! Absolutely fantastic. |
 McKay 2005-01-22 . chapter 1Brilliant! Maybe I don't really believe it either, but who cares? I still love the idea. Nice job with the characters, too. |
 stutter something profound 2003-10-13 . chapter 1are you a lesbian?
Wha? *brain hurts from stupidity* You don't have to be gay to write slash stories!
Good story! I like the way you write the character! Very intriguing! *punts person who left dumb review* |
 kay 2003-03-27 . chapter 1 are you a lesbian? |
 SmoothAsVelvet 2002-12-09 . chapter 1 You make slash stories very good. I like them! hehe. Oh yeah, I liked the Pretender reference (good show, Jared is hott) |
 pandapearl 2002-12-09 . chapter 1 wow, you sure know how to pick a supporting character and emphasize their importance. so true, so true. it's the small things that make up life and give it it's importance. keep up the writing.
- panda |
 Megan 2002-12-04 . chapter 1 Good work. I was very intrigued, and I was not disappointed. Thank you for that. I like your writing style. I'm not sure it exactly captures Sookie's voice, the one we get in her dialogue on the show, but it definitely captures and inner voice that is believable. Hm, what else to say? I liked it a lot. Brave subject choice and it totally worked. |
 Samantha14 2002-12-04 . chapter 1very very interesting. |
 swith 2002-12-03 . chapter 1 I sat here staring at this link, thinking "I will not click this, I will not click this, I will not...dammit, it's Twi!" and clicked anyhow. Weird, yet darkly funny. "One way or another" - scary Sookie. Nice job. |
 2002-12-03 . chapter 1 that's...interesting. well written. a new idea, thats for sure. brownie points for creativity! |
 jewls13 2002-12-03 . chapter 1 wow, very interesting. I'll read anything origional and this is definatly origional. Really really well written. |