 co426e 2008-07-21 . chapter 10Com'on! UPDATE! It's been 2 friggen years! I really really like this story because I haven't felt my blood rush this fast in excitement for a while. |
 co426e 2008-07-21 . chapter 8Hey, just pointing out a little mistake, you said in this chapter that Zoe didn't have her spirits but she does because she got them during the Trailmon battle.
Love the story btw. :D |
 megaknuckles09 2008-01-16 . chapter 1dude that story was tight and edgey keep it up i want to see whats |
 dogluv101 2007-01-09 . chapter 10omg, i love it! at first the title scared me!! like zoe actually got her heart frozen! whew... but omg! this was amazing! update soon! |
 Rob of Eternal Fire 2006-11-27 . chapter 10two words my friend: UPDATE SOON! you have an interesting story and i am enjoying the takumi moments a lot. now for the grading.
Pros: I like the plot. you have a vilianous church and a great central vilian who uses brain and brawn. I also like how you use the other Digidestined throughout the story and Veemon's defection was briliant. It adds a realistic feal to the story and depth to the characters.
Cons: the only thing i can see is the lack of a solid back story to the church at times they seem to come out of nowhere. give a bit more history to the church and it's humon followers. also i wish i knew more about why veemon turned to the side of the church.
Overall 9 1/2 out of 10, 5 out of five stars and two thumbs up. keep up the good work |
 The Supreme Dragon Knight 2006-08-02 . chapter 10Yet another wondeful Chapter! I know I was
slow in reading/reviewing this Chapter, but
it was very well written! I await more! PLEASE
continue this, and PLEASE continue writing!! |
 dbzgtfan2004 2006-08-01 . chapter 1This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Takuya and Izumi forever. |
 djb21212-Steeldramon21 2006-08-01 . chapter 10Well, since this is my first time reviewing this story I'm gonna do it the right way. This chapter actually turned out much better than I thought it would. Like I said, sometimes inspiration can hit when you least expect it. And your trademark humor is all over it, too! (chuckles) Well, here's hoping for another chapter soon. C'ya! |
 Shinigami-Halfbreed 2006-08-01 . chapter 10awesome chap, hope u update soon |
 amylovestakuya 2006-07-31 . chapter 10That was so good. I loved it! |
 Kaiser Spartan 2006-06-28 . chapter 9give Zoe a bow and lots of arrows for a weapon! |
 The Supreme Dragon Knight 2006-06-28 . chapter 9Yet another Very well written chapter!
I am enjoying reading this! I look
forward to more! PLEASE continue this,
and PLEASE continue writing! |
 amylovestakuya 2006-06-27 . chapter 9I like it. Please try to update soon! |
 amylovestakuya 2006-06-19 . chapter 8I loved it. But what about Zoe's cut on her shoudler? Update soon. |
 amylovestakuya 2006-06-02 . chapter 7I loved it. Update soon please! |