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Its been almost TWO years since you last updated!! Update SOON ok? OK!

I thought your story was good, this was the first time i read it and i really liked it. I do not agree with those reviews on the wall of shame for many reasons. 1) DAWN CAN BE A ** SOME TIMES season 7 rining any bells 2)hank could be abusive who knows weve only seen him once anyway you kinda have the right to presume, i always he was a major dick and most of the storys ive read trash hank summers. 3)if most parents saw there dauherts hanging out with spike in the middle of the night they would be absolutly ** he just screems bad boy or i will devoure your vrgin duaghters.4)plus ive ready many stroys that have spike and buffy being really good friends or dating in season 2,3,4,5,6,7 THATS THE REASON FOR SPUFFy ships it doesent matter what happens in the show. I recomend a fic called hold onto me very they the best of friends and guess what season 4 tell those people to read that.I really dont think your story was gross or perverted in anyway i mean did hank abuse them sexually no. your story was wonderful and i encourage you to keep writing. P.S. sorry about all the babble i just get really mad when people trash other peoples storys, my motto if you dont like it dont ** read it. also my friend has this thing on her site that that banns hate mail you mihgt want to look into it k. anyways good story. bye tiffany

When will you ever put up a new chapter. Please put up a new chapter soon. B/c you like never up date the story if you need some help with coming up with stuff email me and let me know and i will gladly help you out
Migya

this story is really awesome and i just love it. please update real soon thanks bye.

hey this is almost a slipknot song yay yay ohh any one who makes fun of my buddy smells like po do

love it. cant what for the rest.

(Bunny) I liked that a lot. Willow and Xander are together which is cool, and obviously the Spuffy thing is good. Wonder what problems she's gonna have as a vampire? Update soon!

I liked it! Keep writing!

Hey, I'm really enjoying this story it's great, can't wait for more so please post new chapters soon!!

greeat fic, please update soon :D
XOXO,
Christa

Ack! The evil cliff hangers! I love this story, please update soon!

intresting twist!!

very cool. and very unexpected.

MHmm. . . Good story so far, you've got a one up on most of the people who try to do this kind of story: Your words flow. Still, it IS a little unbelievable. 1.) Spike and Buffy HATED each other, even when the chip was in, and this looks to be before Spike fell in love with Buffy. Desperate for comfort or no, big hugs and no insults wouldn't happen. 2.) Dawn is NOT a **. She may be whiney, but all us teens are. And she most DEFINITELY wouldn't let Buffy take the blame for everything. 3.) Considering how Hank Summers acted in 'Nightmares', he wouldn't really be the type to abuse his daughters, and if he did, he would have done so before. 4.) Presume much? Why would Hank call Buffy a ** for just talking to a guy? Short-tempered, yes; idiotic bastard, no. Other than these few points, I'd say you've got real potential. It's really hard to get the abusive thing in writing down, and you're off to a good start. You just need to work on it some more. Lots of love, and Good Luck,

Andi