Nice work - spooky. Well done.

Compelling, well written, *and* you cured the virus. I'm impressed!

Good job - I like the way you used SHE and HER for Renfro - it echoed back to S1 when she was first introduced in convos Deck had, and all we knew about her was that "SHE" was obviously trouble.

I think the impersonal pronoun rather than her name gives her so much more weight and evil.

Very creative and definitely worth going over the limit for!

that was soo great! Renfro is even a bigger ** as a gohst and Eva stepping in– that was cool. wouldn't Renfro be in her own sort of hell living in an area with Manticores creations? GREAT FIC! POST ASAP!!

ME

As I said before, sort of a creepy beginning, but that's the mark of a good ghost story. And I loved the ghosts, all of them. Great job!!