Reviews for Black Sun: Parhelion

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Fantastico! 2006-07-11 ch 26, anon.	abuseFantastico!Fantastico!FantaFantastico!stico!Fantastico!Fantastico!
Sharri 2006-06-23 ch 26, anon.	abuseI so love this story. The love is so passionate that i imagine being ashlyn and atcually feel her emotion. I also love the part wiv her n seth. they are so good together. I hope u will make another story for only the two of them but make it adventurous and romantic or anything u want but make sure romance is in it.
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 26, anon.	abuseOH... I absolutely love your epilogue! I like that you're gonna do a story on January.. she's definitely intriguing! muah thanks for the great stories girl!
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 25, anon.	abuseIt's kinda odd to have that as the final chapter. It isn't actually a development of the plot, nor was it a development of the characters. Just a description of some side effects of being Moray's soulmate. Just odd... not some tying up the ends thing
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 24, anon.	abusehuh? You did that deliberately, didn't you? Confuse us with all the hallucinations and memories until we don't know whether what she's seeing is real... Ish. shakes head
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 22, anon.	abuseAs much as I like Moray, I do hope I won't fall in love with someone as screwed up as him. Hehe
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 21, anon.	abusesigh So many characters clearly need anger management classes
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 19, anon.	abuse"Donated the rest of the fabric to the starving children in Africa" ROTFL!!
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 18, anon.	abuseoh no oh no oh no oh no oh no~~! I was right! Geoffrey turned up! DIE!
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 17, anon.	abuseIt's great the way things are working out for Ashlyn and Moray. Terrence is also getting more and more likeable now... and Jaea.. she doesn't make me feel like smacking her as much. Hehe You know.. a sudden thought just hit me. Could two individuals like Seth and Ashlyn like each other, get together... and suddenly one party finds their soulmate?? THat'd be so bad!! [Note: I noticed you sorta did this with Caecillia later in Rome. Oops!]
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 16, anon.	abuseThat Carly and Jehu thing will be tricky. I'm sure they won't forget the thing he had/has for Jaea and that whole link/connection thing is still gonna be quite screwy. Wouldn't Carly always feel second best? And all those leftover feelings Jehu has.. and how Jaea feels. And how Terrence feels about how Jaea feels. Gah!! mess! I'm happy that things are getting better for Terrence and Jaea though =)
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 15, anon.	abuseI love reading... having to pause every chapter to write a review is sometimes such a pain! Well, I suppose it's better to keep quiet sometimes when there isn't anything to say. I'm glad that Ashlyn's gonna break up with her boyfriend although i've got this sneaky suspicion that he's also seeing someone else. Or he's actually planning a surprise visit... and if so, she's so dead! I'm more inclined to believe in the former though or something else not so nice.
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 11, anon.	abuseHand on policy!! smirks If it became more serious?? Is she kidding me?? She shouldn't even entertain thoughts about getting serious with another guy when she's still with her boyfriend! No one deserves to have their partner being disloyal like that. sigh She should do what I did... break up before it gets too far. That way her conscience would be clearer. But then again, Ashlyn might not see it that way right? She might use that "I've never really been in love with Geoffrey" excuse to justify not being clean with him from the start?
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 10, anon.	abuselaughs!! I really like the way Forest manipulated Ashlyn and Seth into going out.. so mischievous! I love the sense of cheeky humour in your writings =)
mythweav.r 2006-06-05 ch 9, anon.	abuseMust everyone have a fit or faint when they find out about the Nightworld? I think I'd be a little thrilled and extremely awed. laughs But then I suppose I didn't have very personal and traumatic circumstances like your characters have had.

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