Very good. I liked Prodigy. Wouldn't it be an interesting AU if Max didn't save Logan, and what happened after that was the delusion of a ghost, like Dr. Crowe in The Sixth Sense? I also liked "Awfully good freinds." amusing.

Hey, thought I'd go back and read this :), and lo and behold, found I'd never reviewed it:).
Ah, I have a smile on my face after reading this. I like the way he wishes Max had been on top of him a moment longer LOL, and especially funny the comment how he hadn't exactly counted the floors on his way down!! And I loved him feeling guilty for having called Tanaka Dr Feelgood - very nice touch!!
Another nice touch was the way Tanaka misunderstood and thought he and Max were going to look after the boy, hee hee, and the 'Okay he thought, we're awfully good friends.' LOL. All very charmingly done! Thankyou:)

Very well done. I can see why you didn't want to cut anything. This is a very well written piece, which is always a nice find on this site. I like this story, especially the interaction between Max and Logan. Nothing like a little shippiness to brighten one's day. Nice work.

touching

wasnt what i expected but in a very good way

This story really works well. Thanks for fixing up the room number/phone thing, btw. I know it was a bit of a puzzlement as to how to do that. Well written, a great premise...and who cares if it went over word limit :).

Glad Logan didn't end up as a grease spot! Very nicely written: sweet, romatic and touching.

very cute, with a nice twist

I lke Dr. Tanaka's ghost - never would have thought of him in a million years.

Very cool the way he picked up on M/L even though they haven't yet admitted anything to themselves.

"Okay, he thought, we’re awfully good friends."

Love that line - classic understaemtne that says it all.

I definately like the idea behind this. It's yet another ghost that I wasn't thinking of. (I also like the way Jude was referred to as Tanaka's "son," a great juxtaposition to Max's own upbringing. Nobody ever referred to her as their "daughter.") Great job!