Great work, Trice.

Woah--very, very clever. Adding my voice to the requests for a follow up.

Very nice and I have to say that this cries out for a prequel.

I could just see the revolution and M/L's role in freeing the transgenics with of course the 'tragic' ending for them...

Don't know if that's what you had in mind for a continuation but if you ever want to discuss it feel free to email me.

marvellous

Loved it even more the second time around! You definitely need to continue :)

Is it at all possible that you could continue this. I really want to know what happens.

Still sort of dark and creepy. You do such a great job setting the tone!! Damn!! Feel free to write another if the cold meds are still in your system . . .;)