This has been my favorite fic so far in all the history of forever! POOR RYUJI! I look at peagusus in a whole new way. He was so cruel! After reading this fic, I went to kiss my Ryuji pic. and tell him it would be okay.

Sweet Christ...you've only gotten eleven reviews for this? @.@ Damn that's surprising...I absoulutely /adore/ the Yami x Ryuuji moment at the end, if that would be any incentive for you to write a fic of said coupling. ^^' I'm going to go and make all my friends on Dark Void read this.

...And adore it with the reverence it derserves. >D ~Ashieyu

Great fic!! ^^

Woah,so sad!Oh well,it was kind of a happy ending!
Good Duke fic!

*stares at the screen, mouth hanging open* Wow. I mean, just... WOW.

That... umm... That was an impressive fic. I hadn't expected anything much different, after having talked to you, but still. WOW. I didn't think it would be this GOOD!

*shakes head* That was deep. That was dark. That WORKED. It flowed smoothly, it fit together perfectly, and it made sense. What more could you ask for?

So, really, this is a very impressive fic, and you should be proud of yourself for it! It's truly remarkable.

Well, I'm not entirely sure what to say of this. On the one hand, I like the Pegasus/Otogi, but I tend to like it...well, fluffier.

This is simply personal taste, however. I really like your story itself, and I like your other YGO works. This was well-written, and the ending was nice (though I was thinking to myself "Aren't you guys on TV?")

Good job.

Oh very well done. I liked it. I gotta check out this mediaminer thing. I really enjoyed the story it put an intersting spin on the show.

Sou. Not bad ^^; I rather enjoyed it.

However, you have a slight problem with commas, which is odd, because you have them some places, and don't have them in others. When you're saying a name, you need to have a comma before it.

"How are you today, Bridget?" Like thus ^^

Uhmnm...and you mixed up the order of Otogi's name. Unless you're using the Japanese way of saying names. I find people screw that up a lot, because in Japan, you say the surname first and the first name last. That's why everyone thinks that Jounouchi's name is 'Katsuya,', which it isn't -.-; You don't call your best friend by their last name, dangit ^^;


So, yeah, that's it. Great story, though, much better than the garbage floating around here so regularly. ^_~

Interesting idea, though *muses* It might require a continuation, neh?

Cheers!

Rorie

Yay, finishedness!
Mm, handcuffs, kinky XD
This is going pretty far for you Sasha... excellent! *appluads* I will win you over to total corruption yet!
Now *kicks* work on UYS, Carolyn's harassing me. And yeah... we need to revive Phoenix too, I miss him. Oh oh oh! I bought 2 parts of your Christmas present today! And I just had a random brilliant idea!
Anyways, I gues I'll talk to you tomorrow. Eep, last day of clases 0.0 Yay! *runs in circles and falls over*

~Skye

PS: Send me the beginning of that hockey fic if you still want me to put in random citriosity ^_~ I think you're almost ready to do it yourself but hey, why not make the hentai best friend get off her lazy ** and write something? ^_^

EHEHE! CUTE!

Dogma: Pegasus is such a dirty bastard... with long silver locks of hair...and crimson eyes... *dazed lovesick smile*

oO WTF?! *groans* I loved the story though! I think Dogma jest loves Peggy... -~-

Dogma: No i loved the story! I wish I was Otogi! *crys*

O_O WOH! TMI TMI TMI! *screems and runs into a wall*

Dogma: *evil snicker* Yes finish the Lemon on MM.com if they stop being so **! >-

Indeed, this fic is very but very nice and I liked it a LOT.When I saw Ryuiji/Pegasus as couple I became interested since I've never saw that couple before. But the result was excellent, it showed another dark side of Pegasus, which btw makes me wanna throw up!! He's a cold-hearted bastard to do such thing to poor Ryuiji who the only thing he wanted was for his dream to came true. Anywayz, the point is I loved it and I can't wait to see that lemon part you're going to post in the other site, I'll be aware of. Keep on writin'!!

Ja ne~

WHOO HOO! *runs around in a circle chasing Legolas* :blinks: O.o I loved this! Very very nice! And guess what, tomorrow I'm going to read the Leggy n Frodo Story!! *giggles* Tee hee. Its late now and I'm tired. ^_^ I even wrote an LOTR fic!!! *_* hee hee. Hmmm Otogi..... *pants* HE's a bish!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lemon? Where? When? *sobs* NOW! :D Hey..update Millenium Dark. >

*pokes Sasha with the ugly stick and huggles her Otogi teddy* Ick, another reason for me to hate Pegasus even more. ;~; Poor Otogi-sama. *glomps him* But glad to see the Yami/Otogi at the end *goes to click "save" on her computer* Sequel......or I will continue to pester you until you do *evil glare in eyes*