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MsMerlin
2005-06-01
ch 1,
abuseHello, This is not a review. My name is Cheryl, and I was the writer, Merlin the Enchanters girlfriend. I can see that many of you are wanting him to finish this story, however, that will not happen. Dennis, aka Merlin, passed away Dec 23, 2004. I hope you enjoy the stories he had as he was quite gifted. I know that a friend of his is keeping one of his websights going and that is It may or may not have some of the same stories as he had here. Thank you for all your nice coments on his stories, he definitely will be missed.
Cheryl
Oldfart
2005-05-28
ch 1,
abuseLike the other 32 fans, who have ask when are you going to write more on this story, could you let us know if and when you plan to do this just to lower are misery, please.
rankokunalpha1
2005-05-25
ch 5,
abuseaarg i cant wait for the next chapter hopefully soon please! this story is fantastic thank you for the great reading experience!
MBB
2004-08-29
ch 1,
abuseIf youi are not planning on continuing this story 9anytime soon), maybe you could remove the TBC and clifhangers at the ending so it would read as a complete story?
MBB
2004-05-18
ch 5,
abuseInteresting story.
Although I usually do not care much for supervamps, i find your enhanced mob-edition convincing.
Too bad that Cordy and Xander lost some of their spark, but that seens to be unavoideble when Scoobies get upgraded with power. (even on the show).
D.Torres
2004-05-06
ch 5,
abusePretty kewl story. I never saw Forever Knight (guessing thats where the new vamps come from) but I like your story.
Blackguard
2004-03-22
ch 5,
abusePlease update soon this fic is very good so far
Darklight
2004-03-22
ch 5,
abuseGreat way of how Faith got mistreated by all of them and ignored, used as backup slayer, the spare slayer.
Get the Mayor having some heavy duty protection on Faith, she dies L loses his children.
Keep the chapters coming
KColl2003
2004-03-19
ch 4,
abuseMerl,
This story says tbc. Well get your ** into gear boy! Only cricitms I would have is we didn't hear what Joyce said to Buffy.
Cerestine
2004-02-27
ch 1,
abuseThis is the single best piece of writing that I have come across on this site. Great concept and excellent delivery (you'd be surprised how often those two don't meet). Please continue to update and keep the story alive.
Diamond16
2003-11-26
ch 1,
abuseI loved the story when I stumbled on it accidently a year ago. I loved the last chapter as weel. It reminds me of an Anime series called Nightwalker. Good stuff.
I hope you update or finish soon. I like this new Xander. Always thought it was a shame that he wasn't developed more beyond two dimensions.
Keep writing!
lordanhur
2003-10-08
ch 4,
abusewonderful keep it comming
chazza
2003-07-25
ch 4,
abuseCool story very different keep writing
Blackguard
2003-07-25
ch 4,
abusePLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Lone Templar
2003-05-11
ch 3,
abuseLove it so far! Can't wait for the Angelus/Xander showdown! Keep up the good work!
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