| Reviews for Burned Out |
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lil sista 6/24/03 . chapter 1 hey tina! i really really like your movie! uh c-ya at home! lata! |
Seul Desir 5/11/03 . chapter 6The chapters are still kinda rough. I've noticed that you seem to like run-on sentences and not putting periods after quotations! Lol... Nevertheless, I'm still liking this fic. :) Keep up the good work! |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 10o wow kewl pic, kewl fic! KEEp up tha good work, and thanx for all tha kind reviews on mah story! _ |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 6Owie! Ororo almost had em! Damn fire! I woulda sent water to it...gahh Angel needs to get back to our side! |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 5Bum bum bum! Who is it! Who caught em! Gahh i wanna know! |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 4*Gasp* NO! They cant have her! The X-men are soo not evil! Gah! *Ahem* |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 3lol this is so funny, i take it u like Toad? lol Are Angel and him gonna get together? |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 2lmao omg thaz so funny! Poor them! *shakes head* kids! lol but i am one of em hehe we rock! _ |
Aireonna 4/24/03 . chapter 1Interesting...very interesting...Bwhahah lol Im ok _ |
Josh 3/28/03 . chapter 1 Very nice story. I wish I was as good of a writer as you.:( |
CosmicGirl22 3/19/03 . chapter 10Thats a veyr cool pic. I like the fire effect |
Seul Desir 2/23/03 . chapter 4I like this story. It's a little bumpy, and I think you need to skim over it for some grammatical errors, but overall, I'm interested! Probably continue to read later. Keep it up! |
Jonathan 2/22/03 . chapter 6 Good job wit da riddle, only that fire is actually its strongest at the blue part, since thats when the heat is most concentrated. Nice use of teamwork in da story. Good so far. |
HoboJono 1/30/03 . chapter 5 Aahh, a twist in da plot, maybe the xmen arn't that fruity after all, Well writen:D |
Jonathan Soff 1/30/03 . chapter 4 Ineteresting dialogue between rogue and Magneto. He seems like he really does care, yet still maintaining a feindish air about himself. Sad, though, that the X men ARN'T that one of the students could so easily be manipulated, after her early encounter with the xmen. Proves that more discipline is required withing the overground/underground lair. Good job :D |