aaww i like it! hehe 'sleep now loud boy' gotta love willow.

OH THIS IS GREAT. LOOK FORWARD TO MORE. PUREST EVIL.

Aw, I love this! I love how you portray Ron- very cool. Can't wait for more!

Fantastic fic! I saw a query about it on WillowCrossings and I immediately knew I had to read it. This is wonderful! Please keep going!

Arg. Sorry this isn't a flame (don't really know what those are) but I think that you have missed a really good chance to make this a really interesting fic.

Continued praise for you writing skill and grasp of the characters but Hermione and Ron have really brought the fic down in my opinion. You could have had some great interaction if Hermione had feelings for Harry. (looked for him for years, still kept pictures ect.) you would also have set a interesting dilemma for Harry (feeling for his old friend compared to new love) and could have drawn parallels with Xander and Willows relationship. Hermione and Willow are very similar characters and as the old saying goes, if you met yourself, would you like each other? If these two characters started at each other it would put Harry in a difficult situation.

Also Harry and Ron getting on so well after so long apart doesn't appear to be very realistic. No recrimination? No bitterness?

Anya became a much more interesting character when she stopped being just Xanders girlfriend, I feel that you have rounded of characters relationships far to early, you could have seen Hermione realize her feelings for Ron after she sees that she couldn’t have had what she wanted with Harry (Although I hate the Hermione/Ron pairing) Also Hermione being a knowledge hungry, determined character, why does she always end up ‘up the duff’?

It all seems to much like happy families and stories thrive on conflict, what makes crossovers so good is when we see two characters that we like and care for arguing and competing, it asks questions of the reader.

My apologies if this seemed a rant and I am in know way putting down a good fic. I just feel that there were possibilities that were more interesting from where you started than where you have come so far.

Don’t hate me :)

Phill

I really love this story

great chapter! I can't wait for the rest! OF COURSE HERMIONE AND RON WOULD, um, hookup as Dawn put it! HEHE! Anyway, just wanted to tell you i liked it!

*Julz*

i was reading this on "twisting the hellmoith" but it's great that its here now :)

Loving it, loving it,LOVING IT! :)

Keep it coming.

AHHH! I thought I was the only one writing a Willow/Harry story! There is now someone else who believes in the pairing! This is wonderful! Love it! :)

Wow. I really really really like this fic. I think it's interesting the way you have made the characters into older versions of themselves, having them a little more mature but still the same good hearts. I can't wait until you bring the twins and Hermione in... you ARE bringing them in right?

Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!

I would quite like to jump into bed with malfoy right now! You are wonderful Please keep writing but dont hurry because it would be awful if it was ruined.

very creepy

cool

alien

Ack! Okay-that was a VERY good chapter!