Aw...i h0pe u can update this..its been so long...

p0or Riese, really...having idiots as team mates..XD

Languange of the amaz0n equals to Stabbing :))

Wahahaha..gn0me is funny..XD
in other w0rds...Riese is the only sane one..XD

hahahaha..
p0or Rieze..being influenced by the
cult beliefs of Hawk..XD

wahahaha...
Duran has lost it..LOL
I understand angela..XD
n0w, i understand why Duran has high defense..XD

long chapter..still good..hahaha
Hawk seems to praise Square ALOT..hahahaha

"Putting my faith in Square"

:))

kevin sh0wed up..LOL
and like hawk they have the same logic...~.~
XD

hawk and his crazy laws but oh so right
sQuare..XD

if i were really in Riese's place...
i think i could have sworn to kill hawk
as well..XD

hahahaha...
LOL, Bugs,,.XD

the bugs...are making the sD3's characters
life g0 crazy..XD

hahahaha...hawk is is cultist of sQuare 0_o..XD

:)) LOL

Hawk and Rieze accidentally kills
the priest of light..XD
Back up date file 0_o

hawk kn0ws everything :))
miss this game so much!!

hilarious st0ries :))

Hilarious~!! I haven't read a SOM f0r a long time...and i missed this game so much...bring back memories...i love it...

very g0od j0b!

Little ugly coin..:))

Fantastic fic. The writing is a bit dull, but you convey the story in an entertaining way and the story has the single most awesome premise EVER!

I thought I reviewed this some time ago, but possibly I got distracted by reality.

Anyway, I'm disappointed you are losing interest... because this is quite clever and a nice alternative to the traditional game-novelization. Hope you find the energy to finish it.

Besides - Lise-Duran-Hawk were my first SD3 team, and there's not a lot of fics that put her in the leadership role. She seems to have adjusted to her position rather well.

I'm glad to see that you're still choosing to work on this story, even though you're losing interest in the series and fandom (which is a crying shame). The last two chapter have not been quite the same hilarious joyride as the beginning, but the humor is there. It might have something to do with the plot on the move. I'm looking forward to what you have to say about the giant turtle they're about to get. Keep up the good work!