I really really hope that you were telling the truth when you said that you would finish this story even if it took years, because it's been years. It's really rare to find a story so original and well written, and I'm not quite ready to give up any hope of you finishing it. Please update!

No! You can't leave off there with such a cliffhanger like that and not update! This is one of my favorite stories please you have to continue it! I wanna see what happens to Videl...don't care about Hercule but I need to know! Please! *gets on knees* Please update the story I beg of you!

awesome!

Darn you Psycho Ann! *Shakes fist in the air for emphasis*

I've stumbled upon yet another one of your stories that haven't been bothered with for a while. But hey! I'm far from being one to talk. I also have some skeletons in the closet that I tend to forget about. Anyway. Good story ya got here and I will patiently await an update.

It truly, truly saddens me to see that you haven't updated in four years. Prepare yourself, my friend, for a painfully and ridiculously long review.

I can't even begin to describe this. I have to say, chapter five was my utmost favorite. In fact, out of all of the fanfictions I have ever read in my life (which is A LOT; trust me), chapter five from this, 'Veritas' of yours, is my all-time favorite. I don't think I've cried like this in years! I must admit, however, there have been maybe...two or three fanfictions out there that made me cry, but certainly not to the extent yours did. Holy cow! Here I am, reading the fifth chapter at about...three or four in the morning (seriously, I knew I wouldn't have been able to sleep when I started this, so I just gave up on the concept of rest), and I'm balling my eyes out and sniffling like an idiot in front of my computer screen! Lack of sleep might have had something to do with it, but that was mostly your writing. Pure magic.

I know, I should have updated chapter five AND this one since it was my favorite, but I was caught up in the moment and clicked the button to the next chapter! Force of habit, I suppose, but I just kept reading. Only about a quarter way through chapter six did I realize my mistake, and I was already hooked on the chapter heheh!

When I first started chapter one, I was definitely not exptecting to read something with such caliber! Plot structures, character developments, writing technique; the best I have ever read since I finished reading the seventh Harry Potter! And in my opinion, this was slightly better.

I loved your take on Gohan and Videl's relationship. I also loved how they didn't get all mushy during the fireworks or how they didn't kiss while swimming in that river. Honestly, most of the Gohan and Videl fanfictions I come across on FFN are hopelessly cliche and cheesy! Your take on the relationship was so mature; and they're 15!! So...all in all...THANK YOU! Finally, an author who understands the structure and solidity behind a balanced, GOOD, relationship! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!

Ahh, what else? Of course! Plot structures! Was not expecting those Veritians. I think I had to read it over a couple times to make sure I had the correct window open. Talk about a plot twist. A very random, yet completely reasonable plot twist in a fanfiction about Dragonball Z. I absolutely loved it! It was so random and unique and just...RANDOM! Maybe I've been forced to read too many cliche stories (a result of FFN lacking all the goos ones), but I was thinking, "Ooh, Gohan and Videl get a moment, and possibly they kiss, and then things go happily ever after!"

Oh no, not with this author! Which is why I love your writing! It's so unique and original from anything else I have ever read in my life! Reading your work, especially Videl's untimely 'death' was like art. While reading that scene my mind was going back to a movie I saw in my Film Studies class, where my teacher had insisted upon 'artistic films'. They were artistic indeed, if only a little bit...weird, but artistic nonetheless! Hahah, don't worry, yours wasn't weird; just artistic! I think this is the first time I've ever called a piece of writing and piece of art.

Needless to say, I've now become a fan of your writing. I know it's been four years...in fact, part of me doesn't even expect you to even receive this review! Although, just in case you do, I'm hoping that you'll finish this up...please?

Aww, come on, you can't resist that 'Gohan charm'!

i'm not complaining about the end of this chapter but i have to ask. how many flames and death threats did you get from your readers because of its ending?

CONTINUE THIS!

Wow...talk about long! Whew!

You deserve a review. So I am.

I agree that Hercule is an underappreciated character. Sure, he's funny, and selfish, and obnoxious, but that doesn't mean that he doesn't love his little girl!

Good job so far. There are quite a few missing/wrongly inserted words, and a few grammar errors, but nothing too bad. It was still a nice read!

gasp. please update!

dear psychoann. it's been near 3 years since you've updated this story. that is cruel. because this is an amazing story. and an amazing cliffhanger. and now I'll be wracking my brains waiting to see what happens. sigh.

much love.

i love you for continuing (it's been a while since i revisited this fic; only part of chapter 7 was out), but i severely hate you for stopping. finish soon or death WILL come (and it won't be pretty!)

Yes. You are truly, totally right.
YOU DESERVE HANGING!! This is the fic of the history, and you just... just... LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!! HOW COULD YOU?? You haven't updated in THREE WHOLE ** DAMN
YEARS!!
I just can't believe this. I was about to write how cool this chapter was, etc, but I'm SOO enraged that I can't. Maybe I'll destroy planet Earth to cool down.
Or maybe not.
Well, I try to recall what I intended to say before this... HORRIBLE cliffhanger and ending.
I felt like vomiting myself when I read the stuff about her and her mother's grave. I think I'm lucky I haven't eaten anything yet 4 breakfast. Actually, I feel quite sick even now.
The part when she suddenly remembered - that was very cute and I loved it.
All the time I was reading this chapter I was like, continuously saying stuff like "ohshitohshitohshit" and "omigodomigodomigod". My nii-chan thinks I'm retarded or sg.
Pleasepleaseplease continue!! Why don't you continue? Please tell me!
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE CONTINUE!! You can't see me now, but I'm begging on my knees! AND with the cute puppy-eyes!! HUGE puppy-eyes!! I love this story, THIS STORY IS DEFINITELY ON MY TOP-3-FAVE-STORIES although I've read about a 10 stories by now...
And gommenasai for shouting so much and saying such horrible things, I cannot control myself. This is such a shock. I never thought this would end HERE. Like THIS. When Gohan finally realised just HOW important Vivi is for him. WHen Vivi could be Videl finally and tell Gohan she was sorry for keeping secrets...
AND I STILL THINK THE ANNIVERSARY-PART WAS THE MOST KAWAII AND ROMANTIC THING I'VE EVER EXPERIENCED.
I think I'm gonna die here if you won't promise me to update this.
PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLASEPLASEPLASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLASEPLASEPLASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLASEPLASEPLASE!
I can't think of anything else to write. I think I'm just gonna curl up someplace and die.
UNLESS YOU PROMISE ME TO UPDATE.
Please.

I just KNEW she wouldn't remember... I had to go to sleep, and have been wandering about how to make the wish, and I tought up the same answer you did. AND (I dunno which part of the chapter, or was it just me?) I actually thought about her losing her memory. I really don't know why, but I HAD this feeling she'd loose it all. :-P Funny, isn't it?
ANYWAY. Goog chapter. LOTS of Gohan's feelings added. Loved it. The beginning about hesitatin was awesome, too. And I can't wait to see how it will continue! Maybe they could collect Shen-long again... Woops, that'll never work, they have to wait for 6 months or sg like that. So... What will the do?
A little short, I am getting used to the very long chapters! :-D

SERIOUSLY: This (the meeting of the night of the anniversary) was the most cute and adorable and tear-bringing Gohan+Videl scene ever, in the show, on fastuff, anywhere. I was sitting here, and reread it again and again. Kawaiiness was just too much to bare!! You are such a great writer! I seriously want to be LIKE YOU one day!
Got to the end: WHAT... THE... **!! You... You... KILLED VIDEL?? I.. I... I hate you!! I'll hunt you and kill you for this!!
She will be resurrected by the Dragonballs... Right? RIGHT...??
Oh pleasepleaseplease...
This was awful!! Why did she die the only time they weren't friends with Gohan!! OH MY ** GOD!! I just have to continue reading on! She will be resurrected by the Dragonballs, will she, will she??
This ending stressed me a lot. ARGG HOW COULD YOU...

I truly h8 you.