*points at screen in shock* It's...It's...It...It's OVER? HOW coudl it be OVER?

*sigh* You do relise that now you have to make this into a trilogy...don't you?

this is awsome! you are a really amazing writer, i almost wish that it would never end...but then i wouldn't get to find out what happens... can't have that now can we? ;)

ecelent as usual

...You need to write... You need to write a novel or SOMETHING... because your writting is AWESOME! I haven't actually ever played any final fantasy game (though I've read about the plots on ff7, dirge of cerberus, ffx, and ffx-2), but this sounds like it COULD be a game plot! OH MY GANDALF! THAT IS FREAKING GOOD WRITTING!

You are AMAZING! I wish I could write HALF as well!

Please write more! I really really really REALLY look forward to reading more of your work!

...heh... *blushes, shifty eyes* I was reading this instead of studying for my finals... eh heh heh... but it was so interesting... _

WRITE MORE!

i like your story. i think the plot is original and the whole thing is well written ( i haven't had the time to finish yet but i can tell after the second part! ). i'm glad you've made yuffie mature and made vincent more than the brooding gunslinger (though i still love that part about him!). okay, i'm looking at the date this has been made and i'm surprised that this has been up since the turn of the millenium! this gem has been hiding for almost 6 years and it is now that i've only found it? can't believe myself. i hope you're still writing good fics! more power wherever you are! by the way, have i metioned that I LIKE YOUR STORY yet? :) peace!

OMG! I read both this and Order and CHOAS on rpgdreamers! I love them both so much I printed them off-I'm no crazy fangirl, you're just that good. And I hate Yuffie, to boot. Your stories are awesome, though, and I'm gald I finally got the chance to tell you so. Very very good work-I'll probably read them both again...and I can't wait to read more!

Kudos to you!

-K-

This is better than "Order and Chaos" was! I really, really love your stuff! You should write and post the third part as soon as you can (don't force yourself, then it sounds rushed as usually isn't real good).

I love how you do all the characters. They're all so well done! I wish I could write this well!

Vincent is done very well in my opinion, and I don't see that as much as I'd like...And the grammer and spelling are very good, which is ALWAYS nice to see.

Both of these stories are some of my very favorites, and I have read A LOT of fanfics, so I think that's really saying something.

Keep up the good work!

-Jade A.

(...why do these reviews always end up so LONG?)

A WINNER IS YOU... uhh, great story I mean. I really enjoyed reading it and can't wait for the sequel (gets pitchfork ready).

Wow. I'll say it again, wow! This was so *engaging*. It took up most of my day reading and I sure as heck didn't mind. I absolutely cannot wait until you continue this series. You're a very talented writer and I wish I could even pretend to have anything more useful to say than 'wow', but I don't. I'm still all wrapped up in the story itself. Sorry!

Excellent story and well worth the length. I'm glad you posted it here. I don't even go to rpgamer nymore because they couldn't support this whole fic. After 500 kb, the page becomes to large for the screen. I'm glad I finally got to finish it. Codo and all that.

What a great story! I especially love Yuffie's more mature attitude-and the fact that she's neither completely adult nor completely childish. Vincent was wonderfully portrayed, as well. Loved it! )

um...whats with the paragraph maks everywhere?

Hey u dhold write a sequel, i love the idea of the sepheroth materia. And you should add stuff about how cid and dragon's are somehow very connected;

1. smoke comes from nose/mouth (cigs).

2. both have undieing love of flying.

3. half of cid's limits have dragon in them, or have to do with the uncanny jumping power both he and most dragons possesse.

You should have somrthing about cid having dragons blood in him, or having large connections with bahamut. Oh yeah, and stuff about cloud finding the sephiroth materia. E-mail me with a reply please, thanks.

Fan,

Jacob Eskenazi

*phew* Finally finished.. :) Though I can't say I mind this fic being so long, since every line of it was keeping me stuck by my computer. "It was definitely worth the time it took to read it"" -happy now? *grin* Oh, but you already know I love your fics.. *grin* Still having nothing to say that could improve your skills, since they surpass anything I can think of.

Arghh! Alright, sorry for being a lousy reviewer, but all I can say is that *this* is *great* Can't think of anything you could do better, 'cause there is nothing bad in this fic. *envious*