woohoo!

wow. that was such an erotic, nicely written chapter. good job. :-)

omg this is such a great story and i usually am sitting here being a ** about things but i am in love with your story! please more!

i find thsi funny it should halve humer rating and aguset

Curse Jar Jar! I'm convinced that he caused the downfall of the empior! I'm telling you watch the movie's again and think about it! I'm sorry I got a little carried away didn't i? :):):) I like the fic! And you know you want to add a little lemon! GO FOR IT!

Crazy? Yes.

Good? No, it's wonderful!

Showtime soft-core **. NICE!

Hey, that was great. I mean real great.
The story is in my opinion very good and it's easy to read. And I have too know it, I'm German and don't understand every word, but I got the meaning of this fic really good, I think.
Your style of writing (can i say that?) is very interesting. The different POVs, the thoughts (they show the real meaning of what Vegeta and Bulma are saying, I like that) and Bulmas battles with herself. It’s just like me, only I have them aloud, so that everybody around me thinks I’m crazy. Maybe I AM crazy.

But what I really wanted to say: Please continue with this story, and don’t let it end to soon!
Thanks!

*pulls out plastic lightsaber* Okay, it looks like I need to bonk both of them on the head damn it! Of course what do you expect from the 2 most stubborn characters in the series. *shrugs* Heh heh, I liked Bulma's conversation with herself about her closet pervertedness. Just admit it! Ha ha. That was great.

aww now look what ya done poor bulma and veggie... oh well they'll get back together.. they always do :P

DUMP HIM, BULMA! DUMP HIM. GREAT STORY. BULMA AND VEGETA ALWAYS MAKE FOR A GOOD READ.

Everythings great thus far. Im still a little confused but thats ok. Also do what ever u want ja ne

Hmm, it was a nice story... I'm not much for critiqueing...

well well well since I read yours you could read mine, Dragonball AC...


Self Advertismen tis over...

I want a banana split now...

Hum, where can I find banana split THAT yummy?

THAT WAS GREAT! me like me like! i HATE yamcha more than i hate life! and believe me i HATE life!
keep writing!

sai fong