this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i wish there was more. i wish that kagome would have gotten pregnant by inuyasha

i love the raw power in your writing. the animalistic qualities that you gave inuyasha are well done. i loved reading him in this light. and the needy side of kagome was portrayed well. there were some choppy spots, but overall this is one of the best stories i've ever read. when your original stories are published, i hope you update your bio to let everyone know where to find them.

Absolutely fabulous. It's a beautiful contrast of darkly erotic yet originally romantic. Your writing style is very smooth and evokes the emotions of the characters perfectly, in turn, causing the reader to absorb these emotions. The way all factors tie in is innovative, and the character development is fantastic. I rather enjoy Inuyasha being a bit more aggressive and sexual rather than shying away at intimacy as the original series has it. Anyway, I very much enjoyed this. A piece of fan fiction genius to say the least.

Sincerely,
Darling Krash

This is an awesome story that I continue to recommend to people and I'm glad you've left it up. I come back and reread it on occasion, which is what's triggered my review.

I know you've moved on from fanfiction, and I hope you're doing well with your original writing, but if you're ever bored and get a chance, could you edit the scene break underlines back into your fic. It'd just take a minute. The site ate them when they did a software update.

Hmm.. i liked it alot but i dont get the whole 'just mates' thing. was it like More than love or non at all. im studying on dogs and i still dont get the heat thing either. maby make an aothers note thingy and explain it

wow very cool and intense story! i'm glad kagome didn't die at the end, i thought that was pretty funny how inu had to watch koga sniff kagome! LOL

I have read some of your other works before, Sailor Moon, and was completely shocked to come across you years later and read your InuYasha fanfiction.
Knowing what a fantastic writer you were as you wrote for Sailor Moon, I could not pass up the oppurtunity to read these works. I'm rather thankful I was not dissapointed in the least. Actually, it simply astounds me at how marvelous you write. I'm not a fan of first person stories, but I simply could not stop reading. THAT is the trait of a GREAT author: writing something unusual that others might not like, only to draw them in.
Bravo, simply, Bravo.

Phew, was that steamy?! Man I loved every little bit of it. This story was really good and I am so glad I found it. I haven't been reading Inu FF b/c most if it is just the adventures Trashy Hooker Kagome and her ** buddy Inuyasha who needs to see a councilor at Everlasting Erections Anon.

No, this was good, real emotions, real people. I love it when there is not just the Ooh...Ah..Ahh, Yeah! but real honest to goodness turmoil and conflict in the relationship between the two participants in the sex. Wonderful job and kudos for every thing good in this story. I wish I could name them all, but, you'd read this review for hours on end.

Keep up the Amazing job!
Alexithimia

damn. that was very insensitvive.
and here im suddenly hoping this will turn out to be a sess/kag story =P
stupid inuyasha

i guess that wouldnt be cheating? if you're two people...

Amazing story. I loved how you offered such a different view on the whole mating relationship. I'll admit it was horribly depressing at the end, and Inuyasha's last line confused me. It makes sense if he is speaking from a youkai standpoint, but doesn't he also have a human half? So that means there really is no hope of Kagome having her happily ever after with Inuyasha, at least not for her. Unrequited love is sad at the best of times, but when it brings someone do such extremes like in Kagome's case I can't help, but pity her. To me the happier ending is one of her leaving him alone to see just how wrong he is about his emotions, though she loves him too much to do that.

*sniff* That was a pretty sweet ending for such a bitter story. I'm sad that its over.

How many times has she asked that? Is the answer ever gonna change? Poor Kags, for her sake, I hope it changes for the better. (in her mind anyway)

So, her soul is back? And Kinky-ho is dead?

Mine, mine, mine, is that all you can say right now?