Hope you come back to the story in the future, I want to see the final product of all the plot threads you have weaving together. Nice to see a Nabiki x Ranma story, I don't think there are enough of them. Go Nabiki.

Hard to get behind this fic, first chapter at least. Yout set up a drasticly improved Ranma, one who suposively has a brain and yet he falls for all Genma's traps and Akane's taunts just like always. You set him up with some kind of super strength and speed, then constantly have him 'off guard' to let him get hit and smashed for normal Ranma 1/2 moments. Seriously how could he NOT see a huge table comming down on him when he was talking to the girl?

he knows how messed up his family is, mother wanting to kill him and father lies and cheats all the time and some how still embraces his honor above all else? Being a Ronin is worthless, sure it's some what a dishonor in Japan even in the modern times but outside that small country it really means almost nothing. Heck even in Japan most wouldn't really blame him if they look at exactly how many people his father engaged him to.

I liked the basic idea of this fic, but some how I just have trouble with 'smarter ranma fics' that make him do the same dumb things any ways.

I really like how random you can be. Keep it up.

Looking forward to more chapters ^^

This is really a great story. Can't wait for more.

Bah... three years and no updates, what's up with that? *starts picketing for updates*

Haha, same old yet refreshingly different Mousse.

This "Sin" seems somehow familiar.

Kuno... well, not to sure about Kuno yet.

The name Emily Tisdale sounds very familiar as well.

IMO it seems that to many "rivals" have shown up at once but I guess there's a reason behind it. Still a good story and going on my fav's list.

Wow, this is a cool story!Please continue it and update soon, it's too good to be left unfinished. ;)

That is an exelent story. The last chapter is tear jerker. I don't cry for most things, at all. You have a talent this is a story that I can't easily geuse the ending please continue it. Later
Rose Fire

This seems interessting enough, I wonder if there is a the posibilyty that One of the cloaks is Tenma.
And I'm pro Nabs Ranma!

Great Story Man!.
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD CONTINUE IT!
I Love the story. I read alot of fanfics in my time ut this has to be the best by far.

pretty good effort so far.

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Well, this was quite a good story. I do remember reading it before, but forgot about it becasue of the long delay in updating it. As long as you can pump out a chapter at the very least, once a month, about as long as this last chapter, this story is gonna be really good. Just keep i flowing and you'll be one step ahead of many other writers.
The premise for this story was quite good, thought i would like to see a little training for Ranma, and a rematch to his and Ryoga's fight, heh heh heh, Ranma never truly loses (he always comes back in the rematch)heh heh.
That and a confrontation with the Amazons, but not for a few chapters though, preferably after the rematch.
Good luck, and keep writing.
Malichite

OK my guess abought Shampoo was way off!
Great chapter.