WOW! IM UTTERLY AMAZED... YOU RETOLD THE STORY, NEARLY-ALMOST PERFECTLY... PLEASE DO ANOTHER CHAPTER!...SO THE FIRST ONE WAS "RIN'S AWAKENING"... THE SECOND ONE SHOULD BE CALLED, "THE TOKYO TOWER: DESTROYING THE MOON BASE." AND THE THIRD ONE SHOULD BE CALLED, "THE REMEMBERANCE OF THE PAST AND UNDERSTANDING THE FUTURE." BUT THESE ARE MY OPINIONS... HOWEVER YOU MAY USE THEM IF YOU LIKE... JUST MAKE THE TITLES SOUND MORE... YOU KNOW... THANK YOU AND I APPRECIATE YOUR REWRITING THIS STORY! LOVE, SESSHY'S WIFE!...

Wow this was so well done

Saa. . .I just can't really describe in appropriate words about this piece. You have such a great grasp on Rin and Shion's personality--their essences! I know this fanfic goes pretty much according to the anime/manga, but I really enjoyed how you put true and conflicting emotions into Rin and Shion.

I watched the anime a few years ago, so I don't remember it that much, but all last night and today, I've been reading the scanlations to the manga (I finally finished at like 10 PM -_-;;). I gathered their personalities really shallowly at first and I thought it was hard at times to truly understand what they were feeling because sometimes their dialogue was so *deep.* All the philosophy and theology stuff were making my head spin. ^_^;; And sometimes, I really couldn't decipher what Rin or Shion were feeling because their emotions seemed closed off. It still bugs me about Shion and Mokuren. . .did he really love her? He said he did, but I felt it was more an act of manipulation than anything else. Then later in his confession after the rape, he admitted he was just lonely. I would like to think that Shion really loved Mokuren, but I have so many doubts. I think Rin really loves Alice, but Shion and Mokuren. . .

Anyways, what I meant to say was that you did SUCH a wonderful job with this! It's really amazing. . .you've really captured their feelings, hopes, dreams, pasts. You have their personalities down. In terms of language, you have a great manipulation of it. Rin and Shion were really brought to life for me. ^^

I commend you for this fantastic piece of fiction! Thank you so much for writing this.

So excellent. I enjoyed reading it off your web page; I love the way you include small pictures at various points of the fic. Please continue.

Maa! It was much too short... I'm sad, I want to see more.. But I understand how that is... Anyway, I really enjoy the angle of Shion and Rin, and the way they merge... I liked the way you portrayed this important transition in Rin's life as a character, but I wish you had continued on to the impact of his awakening to others...

Oh! that was absolutely wonderful!!!! that was cool seeing it from rin's persepctive! excellent job and well written! if you get the chance you MUST write another psme fic...this was just too great not too! well keep up the great work! i really loved it! til next time
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They say you're the best, and I believe it. Maybe it doesn't mean much coming from someone like me, but this is beautiful. I don't really know what else to say, except that I went through and took notes on what you did that made this so effective on me. Maybe one day I'll get to that level of skill.

Thank you.

Cute story. Are you going to make another chapter? I like Alice+Rin. They're a really cute couple. Keep up the good work.

I wish i could write like you...*sniff* sadly I don't...

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can you pleeeeeeaaaase continue 'Family ties: a tale of rezo and Zelgadis

i read this on a website before..i thought it great then and i still do now. will you PLEASE continue with it? PLEASE?!

I read this story a long time ago, on a PSME fanfic website, but I never got the opportunity to comment on it. I just wanted to say that I thought you captured the tone the tone of the story very well. Your use of language was very smooth, and I really enjoyed enjoyed reading the story. Too bad you never did get around to writing another chapter to it.