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Judi2823
2009-04-04 . chapter 25
Oh, I really really love this story!! And you are a great writer. It's so funny, but at the same time serious.
Absolutely wonderful!
ObsessedRHShipper
2009-02-10 . chapter 25
I really loved this story and couldn't put it down. I blame you if I fall asleep during work.

Thanks for sharing your work!
ObsessedRHShipper
2009-02-10 . chapter 2
I usually read quietly but was laughing at load at the last part of the chapter.
alice
2008-11-11 . chapter 22
Ron's mouth grew dry; the man indeed had his hand over Hermione's lips, his wand pressed to her throat, and his hand clenched firmly around her arm.

I really do have to wonder how it's possible for this guy to be doing all of that. Perhaps he has three arms? One hand on her mouth, one hand on her arm, one hand holding a wand, pointed at her throat...
haha jk. It's a good story, I've read it before, and I just came back for fun to read it again recently. I just noticed that fact and figured I should let you know or something... it was actually pretty funny trying to visualize it.
At any rate, it's a good story. I've also read Interlude, and i definetly think you've improved as a writer, so kudos to you.
Thanks for the entertainment. I found it slightly funny that I too, am procrastinating studying for finals, just as you were when you wrote this...
iriepotter
2008-09-24 . chapter 25
OK- so I am years reading your story (I also read and loved BTH) but I've found that good ff is never out of date. I love your writing and absolutely love both of these stories. All Ron and Hermione goodness!!
poetesse
2008-09-09 . chapter 25
I just read Bury the Hatchet and this story again. (Not JUST, it took a couple of weeks to eventually get through them, lol) I got bored waiting for an update of Interlude. I loved rereading them. I hadn't read them since you first wrote them, so I didn't remember all of the details anymore, so it was great going back through them. You are a great writer and I love everything of yours that I have read. I would have liked to see a Harry/Diana spin-off as well, but that would be WAY off canon now, considering Harry and Ginny are married with kids. Oh well, I guess it wasn't just meant to be. You did a great job with both of them and I can't wait to read what you have left of Interlude as well. :)

Hillary
saknicole
2008-08-06 . chapter 2
hahaha, hilarious about Ron catching the bouquet, it is so him!
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 25
What does Dumbledore do in the summer?
And somehow, everything seemed perfect in the world. Nah, doesn't sound too good...

Well its over, and I may possibly return to read Bury the Hatchet!

*unanimous groans from imaginary audience*
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 24
AAH! Okay, I have these nice things, I think, "Oh, I should mention that in my review!" but by the time I get to that button, its all forgotten!
Okay, well one of them (I always remember a chapter late):
If they haven't been sleeping, what HAVE they been doing? (couldn't help myself)

OH! I remember now! What did Professor Trelawney do after she eskimo-kissed the toad?
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 23
I love that movie! Back to the Future: "It's not you. It's your KIDS!" or whatever it was...
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 22
Hmm, I read A Wrinkle in Time, by Madeleine L'Engle...
Yay! The muggles are okay! I'm ALIVE!

I want a shout out too...
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 17
Once upon a time, I read "Bury the Hatchet". In quick succession, I read, "Perfect World", comprehending barely anything and not caring...

Years later, I find those two tales once again. "Perfect World" sounds more familiar, so I begin. Then I notice how UNfamiliar the plot is! Finally, it connects with some stray sparks in my head and I learn how terribly incomplete my mind is. But it is only at the end of Chapter 17 that I truly recall Hermione's imperius curse... To think that still I do not recall Malfoy involvement, Ministry elections, Scuro scrolls, etc.

It's like reading this anew!

So my review is: Finally I connect at this chapter and I miss those crazy songs!
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 16
So the tall man in the fire is DRACO!

You're a really good writer. And I'm not just saying that. You can get the fire lit, the walls painted, the characters alive, and the past left behind. Maybe you can consider it as a backup plan or career or something. Make up your own characters and run with them...

okay, this review barely has any value in it for the story, but oh well...
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 15
Erm, what class does Hermione teach?
loony
2008-06-25 . chapter 14
Thank you for concerning yourself about your readers!
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