Reviews for An Undefinable Sweetness

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electric pancake 2005-06-13 ch 17, anon.	abusewas it intentional that she was referring to him as 'Mr. Bristow'? I started with Chapter 17, so, yeah. If it was a joke-thing then I missed it and was slightly freaked by it and the Jack images it conjured.
Vaughnzangel 2005-02-22 ch 24,	abusehi jenn i gotta say ur story is so great! I luv it. and its so believe able i can close my eyes and watch the characters saying those lines !! thanx soo much for this GREAT fan fiction ~amanda
Raina 2004-04-13 ch 13, anon.	abuseOK... so woh am I slow! I have read this like twice and I have read Ella Enchanted like a billion times and I JUST reconized this line! Ha ha ha! Her contrariness would keep him laughing and her goodness would keep him in love
chickiee-dee 2004-02-01 ch 42,	abuseHey! read the WHOLE story the other night and I totally LOVED it. definalty one of my fav stories I've read (and I've read a few). i know it was finished AGES ago I'm just real slack and found it the other day, I've read a couple of your other stories and their awesome. Keep up the good work. lol alyce :-)
Chaz 2003-12-27 ch 43, anon.	abusewow that was really good it took me so long to read but was worth it i like happy endings please write another story for me x
Pip 2003-12-18 ch 43, anon.	abuseWow... You're (I think) the same age as me and you have written an awesome story. I read it all in like 3 hours maybe. I'm living in Japan at the moment and haven't managed to find alias on tv for the whole 9 months I've been here. It was taken off New Zealand television about a month before I left. I'm hoping they put it back on after I get home (in Feb). I'm gonna be reading more of your stories when I get time. I should be studying physics, maths and chemistry, but fanfic is so much more entertaining.
xanya-forever 2003-11-21 ch 43,	abuseGolly gosh, I just read that whole thing in one go. Good thing it's holidays and I don't have any committments. Oh, except for the tv... Anyway, I don't know why I didn't read it earlier! Silly, silly me. But I'm on the bandwagon now, even if it is a few months too late. I loved it, every bit of it. At the start I was like "no she DOES love him!" but then you resolved that and I was happy. But I knew that they weren't going to be properly happy for a while, and of course... you had to be extra mean. When Danny got shot I seriously thought it would be Vaughn, but he wouldn't die of course (it's some kind of blasphemy to think of Vaughn dying) and I was all in a flutter. The ending was just perfect, I am so jealous of Sydney. Argh, I want a Vaughn! I loved the literary touches you added, I thought the Macbeth sililoquy was especially fitting. So yeah, a ten/ten fic all the way through!
Kaylee 2003-10-26 ch 43, anon.	abuseLove it!! You are such an awesome writer!!
Wibin ForNumen 2003-09-21 ch 43, anon.	abusethat was good. it ended perfectly. sydney and vaughn getting married...couldn't be better. love it. you should make a sequel that tells about their child.
twin*muse 2003-08-03 ch 43,	abuseAbsolutely wonderful Jen!! Another tear-jerking, smiling-widely, sighing-our-hearts-content-out ending!! I loved this fic and thought it BETTER win an award!! LORDY girl, I STILL believe you're a writer for J.J and you're just pulling our legs here! LOVE the fic! Good luck on the other awards and stuff!! Sorry it took so long to get to this one, I've finally got a vacation this summer and then a lot of...bad/good things happened in the fam so it was tough getting back to the ff.net! LOVE YA' GIRL! thanx a million!
Raina 2003-07-16 ch 40, anon.	abuseOnce again I LOVE this story. ( is that not made obvious by the fact that I have read it more than once?) And... What comes as a set... Syd and the baby? Or the condoms and the candlees? ( currently trying 2 keep a straight face and failing horribly.) -Rai
joyce 2003-07-02 ch 39, anon.	abuseohmigod that was brilliant, the perfect way to resolve everything and add in a (final?) twist. i was selfish and didn't review before because i was reading and couldn't be bothered but now i think that i just might. this was fab.
Sarah 2003-07-02 ch 39, anon.	abuseIm saying the word rewrite it.
Sarah 2003-07-02 ch 38, anon.	abuseare youcrazy she can't be pragnant we meed fluff not heartattacks!
mala 2003-05-25 ch 38, anon.	abuse** a! sorry for my french but lord! i have actually been able to hold in my reviews for all of those insane cliffs but this is the limit. i am aware that this story is over but because there are still 3 chapters left, i have hope. please don't kill off vaughn. please.

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