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skaterkep
2009-11-15 . chapter 10
This chapter is pure poetry. The allusions and everything just- ah I loved it!
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 16
lovely chapter

I so love this story..please update ASAP
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 13
fudge..what a dope
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 10
damn looks like sirius is a traitor after all

crusifiction..wow..oh..mm..had me pulling my hair by the end of this chapter
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 9
oh hell not good

question..I am assuming you are being accurate with your depection of russian orthodoxy, so my questions are (1) are you being accurate with your depection? (2) are monks able to live (some orders only I would assume) outside of thier monistary? I ask this because I only very vague knowledge catholism (roman, greek, or russian) and of that I know virtually nothing about greek or russian

let me know, just curiosity

love the story..I am not one usually for 'faith based' stories or subjects but this is nicely written without it being 'here let me shove religion down your throat' kind of thing
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 6
that's plain evil..thought maybe they were refering to carrie (movie)
snapeangel
2009-10-21 . chapter 4
very nice change in severus..if any9one needs a little religion to help them heal and find redemption it's him
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 16
Excellent story. As long as you are not comparing Severus to Jesus. I felt you got a bit close. That he too would be persecuted in the same way is acceptable. Many of Jesus' followers were.
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 15
Give the glory to God!
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 14
He will recover. Poor Draco! Poor Harry!
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 13
Priest you better handle this well!
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 12
Remus isn't going to be happy! Neither is Harry!
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 11
His body would be cold after staying out all night and being hung like that. Circulation would be poor.

If you are trying for a miracle here then attribute it rightly to God. Otherwise you are treading the ground towards blasphemy. Careful.
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 10
Wow! I really do like it! Terrific! Id that really Sirius?? Or is it Polyjuice?? Or a demon??
Cassandra30
2009-05-25 . chapter 9
It is the The Prince of the Power of the Air. That is a bit different. I know it seems nit picky but the difference is tremendous.

This makes a great deal of sense. I really like it.
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