 Lientjuhh 2008-11-13 . chapter 18good story... Well done... ;) |
 Cremello 2008-08-27 . chapter 18I love it! It's a bit unreal with the special powers, but I still like it. Good job! |
 BloodyRose622 2008-08-01 . chapter 18Great Job and great story! Thanks for such an awesome story! |
 Olaf74 2008-05-01 . chapter 10Its fantastic! |
 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-07 . chapter 11Good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-07 . chapter 10Bummer.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-07 . chapter 9Bummer.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-07 . chapter 8Good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-07 . chapter 7Good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-07 . chapter 6Very good chapter, bit of a bummer at the end.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-06 . chapter 5Good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-06 . chapter 4Good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-06 . chapter 3Very good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-06 . chapter 2Very good chapter.
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 TxA-GunFighter 2008-04-06 . chapter 1Very good start.
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