very good story you got there but if the king of earth's brother married the moon queen serenity then wouldn't Darien and serena be frist cousin and couln't marry?

also this story struck me as it could be a possible ranma crossover.

all in all nicely done

that was good! but I thought Hakura was alaways a girl, just dressed like a man?

That's soo sad. And yet soo sweet. Its touching how Darien defended the little baby. And so adorable how the little girls defended the baby. Please write more.

Excellent view you have here! This was a good story! I like it!

good job w/ this chapter ) i really liked it!

i love it i want to know what hapens! keep it up!

My god that was good no great all i can say is wow please write more soon i love the way u write

It's so sweet! Yet... sad! Is that all? It can't be! I wanna see a prequel to this! Please? Pretty please? Anyway, let me know any time you post *any* fics or updates! You're a great writer! Keep up the good work! -

*Raven-hime*

Good so far and I am looking forward to how things progress!