This was so funny.. The end had me in stitches.

He he.Rinoa just put Squall into a bad position . Not that kind! But you get it.

And Selphie made it worse.

*had a heart attack and died*

BWAHAHAHAHAH! i loved the ending! keep up the good, quality work!

This was freakin hillarious! "Little boy" *falls over laughing* That was the best part! Uh...I got kidna confused, but I'm always confused. Great job.

I had to read it over again to understand all of the thoughts, but anyway...LOL! And some spaces and some name labels and you got yourself one HELL of a comedy fic!

Open thoughts:

1) Why didn't the e-mail system respond to me on the new reviews.

2) Open letter to "Kiss my ass, Alan Smithee": You want some of me? STEP ONTO THE SITE AND SHOW YOUR STUFF.

"YOU DISGUST ME YOU FREAK!" LOL!

ALAN SMITHEE SUCKS ASS.

This was really confusing... I couldn't tell who was talking and what was going on half the time... no, all the time. If you worked on the format a while, though, this could be pretty funny.

Seifer's House of Chocobo Porn...hehe. I dig that song...