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wake up and make out...perfect

oh this is actually sweet. i like reading about a nice Brad... the image of him being held by ran is just plain cute. good fic.

So sweet! I loved reading this, especially with your descriptions of Aya's feelings and emotions, and the responses of his teammembers, with Yohji teasing him and Ken being puzzled. Such a lovely set of scenes! ^_^

*hands her pocky and other candy* well you said candy was much appreciated.
At first I thought that Aya's koi was Yohji (tanned skin and all) but then I realised it was Brad. ^^ This fic was nicely written. Congrats *hugs* thank you for the pleasent distraction from my homework. ^^ Cant wait to see if you write more.

Falconsong k'Vala

I've only read one BradRan before, so this is unexplored territory for me. And you make me want to move right on in and set up shop! That was brilliant.

That was REALLY good! You should seriously think about continuing the story like. You're a very good writer and you've already made the setting... please.

Cheers & bis später!

Candy, eh?
*feels inspired* O.o whoa. my muse is having dirty thoughts about a BradxRan from that one.
Gah! *bangs head against monitor* I didn't NEED to see that!

Anyway! I liked it. As I generally like anything with Brad in it. That is unless it has been written by someone with the grammer/spelling of a two year old. Too many people out there like that, but this is not the time to be ranting!

I liked your story, hope you write more. ^__^

^_________^ Nothing else to say except what I'm saying now. ^^ Me likes.... ^^ *purr*

Ooh! I realised! ^^
I do so love a good Brad Aya fic... ^^ Good job! XD

MORE CRAW/AYA PLLEASEEEEEEEE I WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AYA/CRAWFORD FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just love the pairing please write more please?bn

Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aya/Ran & Brad forever!!!! I so LOVE this pair. I wish more people would write them together. *hugs* This was a really nice and warm fic. Dare I hope you'll write more of this pairing?